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• The Wing

  

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  June 10, 2016

  Anytime, Ben!  I hope you find it helpful.

  Anytime, Ben!  I hope you find it helpful.

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 10, 2016

  Alright! Finished the rest of the story. Please edit it when you can, guys. And thanks for reading!

  Alright! Finished the rest of the story. Please edit it when you can, guys. And thanks for reading!

• The Wing

  

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  June 11, 2016

  Hi Ian! Sorry to keep you waiting.

  Hi Ian! Sorry to keep you waiting.

• Sotek

  

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  June 11, 2016

  I had a quick look at Wing's edits and I can't add anything to them. You've a good eye for this sort of thing Wing.

  I had a quick look at Wing's edits and I can't add anything to them. You've a good eye for this sort of thing Wing.

• The Wing

  

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  June 11, 2016

  Thanks Sotek, that's encouraging to hear. 

  Thanks Sotek, that's encouraging to hear. 

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  June 13, 2016

  Well, yeah I'm honestly a little surprised I'm here again. I was kinda hit in the face by inspiration last week and began writing a little something. It's just a quick prologue for now, more of an introduction into the characters than anything else but still something quick and fun to write.

  So if anyone could give it a look let me know, I've been trying to share it over Google Docs but that hasn't worked so I guess a Word Document will have to do for now 

  Well, yeah I'm honestly a little surprised I'm here again. I was kinda hit in the face by inspiration last week and began writing a little something. It's just a quick prologue for now, more of an introduction into the characters than anything else but still something quick and fun to write.

  So if anyone could give it a look let me know, I've been trying to share it over Google Docs but that hasn't worked so I guess a Word Document will have to do for now 

• Teineeva

  

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  June 13, 2016

  I've given it a quick read and to be honest this looks pretty interesting. I haven't really taken the time to properly proofread it yet though, but do not despair; I'm getting on that.

  I've given it a quick read and to be honest this looks pretty interesting. I haven't really taken the time to properly proofread it yet though, but do not despair; I'm getting on that.

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  June 13, 2016

  Ah thanks Teineeva, I really am hopeless with proofreading (my one flaw, well one of my many flaws anyway)  So thanks for helping out

  Ah thanks Teineeva, I really am hopeless with proofreading (my one flaw, well one of my many flaws anyway)  So thanks for helping out

• The Wing

  

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  June 13, 2016

  I'm also on it - you'll get two rounds of proofreading. 

  I'm also on it - you'll get two rounds of proofreading. 

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  June 13, 2016

  What more could I want, an army of minions to proofread my work for me 

  Ah, seriously thanks Wing, gotta have all the help I can to make it easy to read for someone who isn't blind as a bat. As a side note, I was trying to decide between titles...

  At the moment I can run either Jot Se Yol or Jot Do Yol which both mean Maw of Fire, or what I was originally going for, Lavaas Se/Do Yol which is Song of Fire...Both sound pretty cool, and really are equally valid as names so I'm a tad stuck. Any opinions?

  What more could I want, an army of minions to proofread my work for me 

  Ah, seriously thanks Wing, gotta have all the help I can to make it easy to read for someone who isn't blind as a bat. As a side note, I was trying to decide between titles...

  At the moment I can run either Jot Se Yol or Jot Do Yol which both mean Maw of Fire, or what I was originally going for, Lavaas Se/Do Yol which is Song of Fire...Both sound pretty cool, and really are equally valid as names so I'm a tad stuck. Any opinions?