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• The Wing

  

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  June 17, 2016

  Done. Nearly no mistakes this time. Nicely done, Ian! 

  Can't imagine how weird it would feel to be the opposite gender. I definitely wouldn't miss a 'bust', though. x)

  Done. Nearly no mistakes this time. Nicely done, Ian! 

  Can't imagine how weird it would feel to be the opposite gender. I definitely wouldn't miss a 'bust', though. x)

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 17, 2016

  I'm honestly not sure how I'd respond if I went through Ardolan's transformation. It would certainly be an experience, though. Anyhoo, thanks for the editing! I'll post the story as soon as 24 hours pass since I posted 'The Sugar Pilgrimage'.

  I'm honestly not sure how I'd respond if I went through Ardolan's transformation. It would certainly be an experience, though. Anyhoo, thanks for the editing! I'll post the story as soon as 24 hours pass since I posted 'The Sugar Pilgrimage'.

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 18, 2016

  Next part of 'Agents of the Queen' involving some work for the guards and a conspiracy to regicide! Please look through it when you guys can. Thanks! 

  Next part of 'Agents of the Queen' involving some work for the guards and a conspiracy to regicide! Please look through it when you guys can. Thanks! 

• The Wing

  

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  June 19, 2016

  Sorry to keep you waiting for so long!

  Sorry to keep you waiting for so long!

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 19, 2016

  Yet another Agents of the Queen, involving a growing party of heroes (including a senche-panther) and some romantic feelings! As usual, please take a look at it when you guys can. Thanks! 

  P.S: The last part of this, pages 5 and 6, were written while suffering from insomnia, so forgive me if they're not so good. But, I really wanted to get this finished as soon as I could, and I figured I might as well write before trying to sleep again. 

  Yet another Agents of the Queen, involving a growing party of heroes (including a senche-panther) and some romantic feelings! As usual, please take a look at it when you guys can. Thanks! 

  P.S: The last part of this, pages 5 and 6, were written while suffering from insomnia, so forgive me if they're not so good. But, I really wanted to get this finished as soon as I could, and I figured I might as well write before trying to sleep again. 

• The Wing

  

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  June 20, 2016

  Bleh, shunt ye eyne, bairns!  Here be the osculation of orifices!

  Bleh, shunt ye eyne, bairns!  Here be the osculation of orifices!

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 20, 2016

  I actually had to look up 'osculation'. Kudos on your sesquipedalian loquaciousness!

  I actually had to look up 'osculation'. Kudos on your sesquipedalian loquaciousness!
• The Wing

  

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  June 20, 2016

  I actually had to look up 'sesquipedalian'!  We're even!

  I actually had to look up 'sesquipedalian'!  We're even!

• Golden Fool

  

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  June 22, 2016

  Hello again. This time I'm here with a short story about Sir Fluffles and his lovely assistance Chuckles 

  I've probably done my usual of switching between tenses, but hopefully it makes some sense.

  Hello again. This time I'm here with a short story about Sir Fluffles and his lovely assistance Chuckles 

  I've probably done my usual of switching between tenses, but hopefully it makes some sense.

• The Wing

  

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  June 22, 2016

  This was so weird and awesome, dude.  I honestly had no idea what was going on until the transformation, so I'll say job bloody well done. Very little corrections needed to be made as well; you're on a roll!

  This was so weird and awesome, dude.  I honestly had no idea what was going on until the transformation, so I'll say job bloody well done. Very little corrections needed to be made as well; you're on a roll!