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• The Wing

  

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  June 25, 2016

  Finally done! 

  Finally done! 

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  June 25, 2016

  Bah, it's no lie, I'm pretty hopeless with my grammar and my spelling can be a bit off.  (though I'll blame the second on being an Australian who spends too much time on an American website) 

  Without your help I'd be posting these chapters with massive amounts of errors (and I hate errors). So yes Wing, totally would be helpless  without ya :D

  Bah, it's no lie, I'm pretty hopeless with my grammar and my spelling can be a bit off.  (though I'll blame the second on being an Australian who spends too much time on an American website) 

  Without your help I'd be posting these chapters with massive amounts of errors (and I hate errors). So yes Wing, totally would be helpless  without ya :D

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 25, 2016

  Another 'Agents of the Queen', involving an Altmer child and a ruin full of vampires! As always, please look at it when you guys can. Thanks!

  P.S: I really can't remember if Aluvus, a minor NPC that appears in this part, is Altmer or Maormer, so forgive me if I depicted him as the wrong race. Please let me know when you guys look at my work. Thanks again!

  Another 'Agents of the Queen', involving an Altmer child and a ruin full of vampires! As always, please look at it when you guys can. Thanks!

  P.S: I really can't remember if Aluvus, a minor NPC that appears in this part, is Altmer or Maormer, so forgive me if I depicted him as the wrong race. Please let me know when you guys look at my work. Thanks again!

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 25, 2016

  I'm in the same boat as Dragonborn, to be honest. You're awesome, Wing!

  I'm in the same boat as Dragonborn, to be honest. You're awesome, Wing!

• Golden Fool

  

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  June 26, 2016

  I'm back :D

  This time with the next chapter of Deceit. Hopefully I haven't changed tenses too much this time.

  I'm back :D

  This time with the next chapter of Deceit. Hopefully I haven't changed tenses too much this time.

• The Wing

  

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  June 26, 2016

  Guys, you really made this wing grin bashfully (I am incapable of blushing). xD Thank you so much! It's my pleasure to be able to help you out.

  Guys, you really made this wing grin bashfully (I am incapable of blushing). xD Thank you so much! It's my pleasure to be able to help you out.

• The Wing

  

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  June 26, 2016

  Wow. That was completely unexpected! Poor Elereth! D:

  Also, I'm noticing fewer and fewer errors. :D Well done!

  Wow. That was completely unexpected! Poor Elereth! D:

  Also, I'm noticing fewer and fewer errors. :D Well done!

• The Wing

  

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  June 26, 2016

  Hey! Very few mistakes and only one tense change! Way to go, Goldie! *insert thumbs up emoticon here*

  Hey! Very few mistakes and only one tense change! Way to go, Goldie! *insert thumbs up emoticon here*

• Golden Fool

  

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  June 26, 2016

  Yay! Well at least I'm getting better :D

  Oh and to answer this question "Why?" does this sentence have any problems if placed after the her decision?

  I already had a lead to look into and if need be I could come back later. 

  Yay! Well at least I'm getting better :D

  Oh and to answer this question "Why?" does this sentence have any problems if placed after the her decision?

  I already had a lead to look into and if need be I could come back later. 

• The Wing

  

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  June 26, 2016

  Nope, no problems there! You could add a comma between 'into' and 'and' if you feel like those two complete clauses could use a separator, but it's your choice. ;)

  Nope, no problems there! You could add a comma between 'into' and 'and' if you feel like those two complete clauses could use a separator, but it's your choice. ;)