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• Golden Fool

  

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  June 22, 2016

  With Cyre calling the Beast "Darling" he does this because the Beast does not have a name (and he thinks it's amusing) so should it still be capitalized if it's being used in that way?

  With Cyre calling the Beast "Darling" he does this because the Beast does not have a name (and he thinks it's amusing) so should it still be capitalized if it's being used in that way?

• The Wing

  

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  June 22, 2016

  Well, it's really up to you. Names and nicknames are capitalised, so if you consider this a substitute nickname, go ahead and capitalise it.

  Well, it's really up to you. Names and nicknames are capitalised, so if you consider this a substitute nickname, go ahead and capitalise it.

• Golden Fool

  

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  June 22, 2016

  Capitalized it is then :D

  Now just to copy it over and post it.

  Capitalized it is then :D

  Now just to copy it over and post it.

• Tenebrous

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Next part of 'Agents of the Queen', involving ancestor spirits possessed by evil forces and a Queen that doesn't give a damn about etiquette! As usual, please take a look at it when you all can. Thanks!

  Next part of 'Agents of the Queen', involving ancestor spirits possessed by evil forces and a Queen that doesn't give a damn about etiquette! As usual, please take a look at it when you all can. Thanks!

• Ben W

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Alright, before I head off for home due to work at 5, I'm going to leave ch. 15 here. I'd like any and all criticism on to how I can improve it if it feels.... wrong to some of you. 

  Be warned, it's a long one. Have fun :)

  Alright, before I head off for home due to work at 5, I'm going to leave ch. 15 here. I'd like any and all criticism on to how I can improve it if it feels.... wrong to some of you. 

  Be warned, it's a long one. Have fun :)

• Mirric

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Hey i would like someone who would read over what i have in private if possible.

  Hey i would like someone who would read over what i have in private if possible.

• ProbsCoolerThanYou

  

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  June 23, 2016

  If you want you can PM me the file.

  If you want you can PM me the file.
• The Long-Chapper

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Caught a few things. 

  Caught a few things. 

• Mirric

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Yeah i will do that.

  Yeah i will do that.

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  June 23, 2016

  Hey there Story Corner, got a little bit of my chapter here that I'd love for someone to go over. 

  The chapter itself isn't quite finished, but since I focus on three different parts I figured I'd drop this part in now. Here is were the link should be, I reckon I've got a 50/50 of it working, if it doesn't just let me know and I'll upload a Word Doco instead 

  Hey there Story Corner, got a little bit of my chapter here that I'd love for someone to go over. 

  The chapter itself isn't quite finished, but since I focus on three different parts I figured I'd drop this part in now. Here is were the link should be, I reckon I've got a 50/50 of it working, if it doesn't just let me know and I'll upload a Word Doco instead