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  • Tenebrous
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    June 14, 2016

    Thanks! This one's something of a 'breather episode', which means it's a bit lighter than normal. It's also fully original- i.e, not based on specific quests from ESO. (Thanks for that idea, btw) Anyhoo, thanks for reading!

  • The Wing
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    June 14, 2016

    Hey Ian, I have to go out for a while, so this might come a bit later than I had anticipated! Really sorry for that! I'm still on page 2 right now but I'll resume editing when I get back.

  • Tenebrous
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    June 14, 2016

    Don't worry about it. Real life is more important- I don't pretend my story needs to be looked at right this instant. Thanks for letting me know!

  • The Wing
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    June 14, 2016

    Sorry for taking so long, Ian! Nice new profile and avatar, by the way. 

  • Ben W
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    June 15, 2016

    Hey guys  

    This is going to sound strange, but when it is read (or if), could you say if it flows "correctly"? Strange I know, but ch. 14 feels weird to me. Maybe it's just me however

  • The Long-Chapper
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    June 15, 2016

    Okay, so what problems with this chapter? It reads fine to me. I like the bit of branching from questline to make things fit better though. 

  • The Long-Chapper
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    June 15, 2016

    PS: and YES COFFEE!!

  • The Wing
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    June 16, 2016

    Ah, sorry I didn't get to this, Ben! But it looks like Lissette was ample aid indeed! 

  • Tenebrous
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    June 17, 2016

    Next part of Agents of the Queen, featuring Ardolan's continued transformation woes, copious amounts of rotmeth and a big reveal! Please look through it when you guys can. Thanks!

  • The Wing
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    June 17, 2016

    On it!


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