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Writers Discuss - Engaging Characters (#12)

  • Member
    September 9, 2015

    Writers Discuss

    Topic #12 – Engaging Characters

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    I think it's high time we talk about a big component of storytelling: creating engaging characters. This is an important topic and one that I could probably discuss forever. Let's see what we can learn from each other!

    What is an engaging character? (In a nutshell)

    What makes a character engaging?

    What are some pitfalls to avoid?

    Give an example of an engaging character, possibly your favorite.

    BONUS QUESTION
    Does every story have to have an engaging character in it?

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    If you have any suggestions for future topics include them in the comments section!

  • Member
    September 9, 2015

    To me an engaging character is one that I can understand, so their motivations make sense, or that I worry about when something bad happens to them. If you can make me care about a character enough to be genuinely worried about them than that is what I would call and engaging character.

    One pitfall to avoid would be believing every "engaging" character needs to have a tragic backstory, a character can be engaging and have lived a perfectly happy life up until the start of the story.

  • Member
    September 9, 2015
    An engaging character does what it is named for- interest and engage the reader. They often are rounded characters who have some forms of change throughout the story, but not always. People become attached to the character and care about his/her well being in the narritive.
    Some pitfalls are defiantly (excessive) predictability, close minded, unchanging, emotionless, all powerful/ always morally correct, etc. These get very boring and disinterest the readers.
    My favorite engaging character is from a series I read as a child. His name is Twig, the main character of "The Edge Chronicles". He has many mishaps, successes, changes much during the series, makes morally good AND ambiguous choices, etc. My 5 year old self CARED about him (though it isn't a book directed at that reading level; my dad read it as a bedtime story. I'd say about 3rd grade is the target age. Still, I read it again recently and liked it still) and that says a lot, because I got interested in very few characters back then.

    BONUS ROUND (duh nuh nuh nuuuuuh!)
    No, they don't have to, but it is much better if they do, in my opinion.
  • Member
    September 10, 2015

    For me an engaging character is one I’m drawn towards for a variety of reasons. The character could be one who the reader feels empathy for or they may connect with the reader. Maybe there’s a trait in them which the reader sees within themselves or a character the reader would like to be or even considers themselves to be for that matter. I remember as a kid when the film Superman came out on TV. I stepped outside my hose and saw another kid on their bike. They were riding down the road no handed. Both their fists were stretched out like they were superman flying. No guesses for who he wanted to be when he grew up.

    There’s a few things which can make a character engaging. First they could be down on their luck, struggling to make their way in the world. But at the same time they are a survivor. They won’t quit and lay down. They don’t always get it right either. The character has to have flaws, get things wrong they have the heart to at least TRY to put things right. Now this don’t mean do the right thing, it’s about putting things right for them.

    They have to grow. Learn what’s around them and progress so they don’t go stale. Progression don’t mean get stronger either. It could be that they become weaker at certain things while they grow in strength in other ways. They don’t however need to interact heavily with others around them.  

    Pitfalls... The Character has to care, they have to be bothered about loss or the idea of loss of whatever kind affects them. Take Albee in Straag Rod. Near the start of the story he’s facing an army of Daedra. He cares for the people around him. He don’t look at the hordes and think. ‘Stuff this I’m off’ before he grabs a horse and rides off in the sunset shouting out ‘Cya you losers’.

    The character just cannot be the all powerful god like chars we sometimes see. If the character don’t care then why should we care about them? If the character is all strong and powerful then where is the danger? Where is the risk of loss?

    If the character don’t evolve or grow then they go stale. There has to be a sense of progression so that when they cry out in victory so too does the reader. Let them make mistakes, then let them try to fix it. Don’t let them be right all the time. A story won’t cause much interest if one character came up with all the ideas and carried them out by themselves. It’s ok for characters to have weaknesses. Don’t have the character grab all the limelight. The brighter the light then the more we close our eyes. You can stare at a dim flame far longer than you can the sun and it won’t blind you, give the character flaws.

    Does a story need to have an engaging character in it? It all depends on the story, and your definition of a character. The simple fact is from my view point is that the writer cannot force readers to like certain characters and hate other ones. There’s always someone rooting for the bad guy, or they feel a stronger affiliation with other chars. Take U.O.T.W. One char in the story is a Whelp called Ebony. My wife likes her but if the truth be told she drives me up the wall.

    Sometimes the character could be objects, take the film Castaway starring Tom Hanks. For those of you that saw it, be honest... Did you shed a tear when ‘Wilson’ drifted off?

  • Member
    September 10, 2015
    I was actually very sad about Wilson.
  • Member
    September 10, 2015

    I'm sorry, Wilson. Wilson, I'm sorry! I'm sorry!      Classic moment.

  • September 10, 2015

    What is an engaging character? (In a nutshell)

    It's not always the good guy. In fact there are many times where I find villains more engaging. Like Golden Fool said, engaging characters are ones that I can understand, empathize with, and their motivations make sense. 

    What makes a character engaging?

    A character who is well-rounded, complex,  that display significant growth throughout the narrative is one that I typically find engaging. Usually they also have a quirk or a habit that is endearing. I am drawn to characters who can still laugh and find humanity in the face of terrible adversity. 

    What are some pitfalls to avoid?

    In the quest to make the "strong, brooding, secretly suffering type", we sometimes end up making a character that is devoid of emotion and and as a result, rather unengaging. Being all-powerful seems to stand out here and I agree. I don't mind powerful at all, but not all-powerful. The struggling soul thing works, but when taken too far, I begin to lose interest. LOL, c'mon pick up the pieces already! 

    Give an example of an engaging character, possibly your favorite.

    I have several. One is the iconic Mr. Spock. I adore his character. He's complex, smart, with a dry sense of humor (when he lets it out) and his plight is very sympathetic. I also find Lucifer from Paradise Lost very engaging. He's prideful but at the same time charming and drawn with quite a bit of sympathy considering when Milton was writing. He could have thrown away Lucifer, just make him the typical baddie, but no, Milton makes him the hero. Another more modern one, though not amazing writing is Thor and Loki from those Marvel movies. Thor is okay, he suffers from some of the pitfalls people have mentioned above, but Loki! Much more engaging, IMO. 

    BONUS QUESTION
    Does every story have to have an engaging character in it?

    No. Stories that delve more into atmosphere don't need to have them. Sometimes Hemingway writes stories that deliberately don't have engaging characters, or at least I don't like them. Stephen King will do this too. Like in the Shining, I couldn't stand any of them. I thought the guy was nuts and the woman was whiny and the kid was creepy. There ya go. 

  • September 10, 2015

    Yeah, I was more sad about Wilson than the guy. See, that's sad when we find a ball more engaging than the main character. Whoops. 

  • Member
    September 10, 2015

    Wiiiiiiiiislooooon! (my eyes aren't puffy; I'm just allergic to sadness) Seriously, good examples, Sotek. I bestow an A plus upon you.

  • Member
    September 10, 2015

    Can we make a theme song named "Wall of Text"? Because it could be applied to many users here. Oh, here's one now.

    What is an engaging character? (In a nutshell)

    "When writing a novel, a writer should make living people--people, not characters. A character is a caricature." 

    That quote was by Ernest Hemingway, I name I vaguely remember and assume is a master of the pen and paper. His quote caught me off-guard one day, when I was writing an admittedly cliche assassin-like character who was... well, just like the rest. Dark, brooding, emotionless, a scowler: all interesting characteristics in separate pieces, but allegedly drab when meshed together.

    An engaging character is not a character at all, but a human being (or whatever race). They have emotions, they have feelings, and they portray them in a way that provokes empathy from the reader. They react to times in such a way, it's quite normal for one of their disposition. Now, they can act differently from each other; one may react in anger towards a lost loved one, while another reacts in crushing depression. But the reactions are real.

    To put it in a nutshell, an engaging person reacts. A character remains stoic after shedding a tear or two. Now, this is only a small bit of what an engaging character is, but I'd rather not fill the text box with so much info.

    What makes a character engaging?

    I mainly explained it in the previous question, but I'll relent to relay a little more information. (Flails in sarcastic reluctance ). Engaging characters are new. Or, should I say, not exactly normal.

    Now, when I say normal, I don't mean human. I mean ordinary -- as in drably humdrum and standard. Consider your standard hero: sympathetic towards those in need, but brutally aggressive when need be, has a good heart but a bad temper, occasionally clumsy, occasionally noble, and forever the same. That is your average hero, and he seems almost... mundane. Why? Because he's the average "engaging character" that writers automatically assume are interesting. Sometimes they can be--if executed well--but most of the time they honestly aren't. You see them everywhere, so often that you grow tired of them. 

    Thus, in order to make an engaging character, you must both play on the provoked empathy of the reader, as well as a new twist on things.

    There are always exceptions, of course. Occasionally I'll find fantastic characters that are quite ordinary, but so incredibly human you must like them. But those are very well-written and well executed characters in a marvelous story. 

    What are some pitfalls to avoid?

    I practically answered this previously. I should stop doing that. XD

    Give an example of an engaging character, possibly your favorite.

    To give a favorite is like trying to pull out just a single hair strand from my hairbrush without seventeen others coming with it; it's virtually impossible. But I'll give one that I've been thinking of recently.

    Altair from Assassin's Creed. He's engaging by the fact that he made mistakes -- a LOT of mistakes -- and began to learn from them. He transformed into a man of wisdom, but it took a very long process. I enjoy seeing that kind of character development in stories/games. 

    Bonus Question! Does every story have to have an engaging character in it?

    No, in the same way that a story doesn't need an interesting plot. You can do it, but the quality can be stacked much higher with one.