While I'm far from being an expert on roleplay, your build's roleplaying section looks fine to me. Regarding tags for your build, "Character Build Blacksmith", "Character Build Juggernaut", "Character Build Warrior", and Race:Orsimer are the ones I'd recommend using, though that doesn't matter until you actually post the finished product over in Skyrim CB.
While I'm far from being an expert on roleplay, your build's roleplaying section looks fine to me. Regarding tags for your build, "Character Build Blacksmith", "Character Build Juggernaut", "Character Build Warrior", and Race:Orsimer are the ones I'd recommend using, though that doesn't matter until you actually post the finished product over in Skyrim CB.