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Character Build: Agent of Anarchy

• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 21, 2014

  Thank you very much :) I just need to work on my presentation, evidently lol. The perk and equipment spreads read fine on Powerpoint...XD it shouldn't be hard to fix them, I just need to go picture hunting. 

  Oh, and a quick aesthetic tip; I didn't put this in here, due a role playing aspect, but if you become a vampire and wear the ebony mail, you basically look like a fiend of shadows straight from the ninth ring of hell, or Boethiah's literal conduit. Your eyes glow through the shadow cloak if you don't have head gear on. It looks sick as balls. 

  However, I didn't want to add allegiance to Molag Ball by becoming a vampire. The Agent already is deep within the web of Mephala, and owes his immortal soul to Nocturnal; luckily, Mephala is an ally of sorts of Boethiah, and in my opinion, the weaker of the two, and Nocturnal will never get his damned soul, because he will live forever. 

  Thank you very much :) I just need to work on my presentation, evidently lol. The perk and equipment spreads read fine on Powerpoint...XD it shouldn't be hard to fix them, I just need to go picture hunting. 

  Oh, and a quick aesthetic tip; I didn't put this in here, due a role playing aspect, but if you become a vampire and wear the ebony mail, you basically look like a fiend of shadows straight from the ninth ring of hell, or Boethiah's literal conduit. Your eyes glow through the shadow cloak if you don't have head gear on. It looks sick as balls. 

  However, I didn't want to add allegiance to Molag Ball by becoming a vampire. The Agent already is deep within the web of Mephala, and owes his immortal soul to Nocturnal; luckily, Mephala is an ally of sorts of Boethiah, and in my opinion, the weaker of the two, and Nocturnal will never get his damned soul, because he will live forever. 

• Borommakot

  

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  April 21, 2014

  I think folks have covered the functionality of the build pretty well, so I'll mention a couple of other things I noticed. In the introduction, I see what you're going for with the word "figment", but I don't think it has a connotation with that meaning.

  As a matter of strictly personal preference, I'd recommend aligning the gameplay section normally, to the left. Centered text is best for quotes or short segments.

  I don't know if this came up before, but I'd also suggest using the completed build perk spread here, with a link to the halfway perk spread.

  Great work on your first build!

  I think folks have covered the functionality of the build pretty well, so I'll mention a couple of other things I noticed. In the introduction, I see what you're going for with the word "figment", but I don't think it has a connotation with that meaning.

  As a matter of strictly personal preference, I'd recommend aligning the gameplay section normally, to the left. Centered text is best for quotes or short segments.

  I don't know if this came up before, but I'd also suggest using the completed build perk spread here, with a link to the halfway perk spread.

  Great work on your first build!

• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 21, 2014

  I fully intended for that stray 'figment' to be fraction. I don't know how it came to be figment; I was working pretty late into the night, I suppose. I agree with the left alignment; I moved everything but the quotes and a few shorter sections over, and it looks cleaner. . 

  I fully intended for that stray 'figment' to be fraction. I don't know how it came to be figment; I was working pretty late into the night, I suppose. I agree with the left alignment; I moved everything but the quotes and a few shorter sections over, and it looks cleaner. . 

• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 21, 2014

  I took into account much of the advice I was given within the first day, which I'd like to thank you all for. I did not expect to get that much attention so quickly. Thank you very much! I changed the pictures on the perk and equipment spreads, and though they aren't professional at all, I think they are much easier to read, now. I found some more pictures, realigned a few things, removed a few badly placed words, and here we go! I'll be adding a role play section soon, with some guidelines and strict rules. 

  I took into account much of the advice I was given within the first day, which I'd like to thank you all for. I did not expect to get that much attention so quickly. Thank you very much! I changed the pictures on the perk and equipment spreads, and though they aren't professional at all, I think they are much easier to read, now. I found some more pictures, realigned a few things, removed a few badly placed words, and here we go! I'll be adding a role play section soon, with some guidelines and strict rules. 

• SpookyBorn2021

  

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  April 21, 2014

  If I'm completely honest I don't know if writing the two sections separately I a great idea. Some people sort of tend to stay in one or two areas and some of them are Character Builders who don't really stray into the writing side of things so they won't notice this extra section. I'm not saying its a bad idea and I'll be keeping an eye out for it because I like this build but just keep what I said in mind.

  If I'm completely honest I don't know if writing the two sections separately I a great idea. Some people sort of tend to stay in one or two areas and some of them are Character Builders who don't really stray into the writing side of things so they won't notice this extra section. I'm not saying its a bad idea and I'll be keeping an eye out for it because I like this build but just keep what I said in mind.
• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 21, 2014

  Oh no, I'll have the role play section here, and as I write the stories and journals, I'll add links on the build. I don't want to clutter it, is all.

  Oh no, I'll have the role play section here, and as I write the stories and journals, I'll add links on the build. I don't want to clutter it, is all.
• Ares

  

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  April 24, 2014

  You should think about adding the shout "Dismay" to the used shouts, if you haven't already. 

  You should think about adding the shout "Dismay" to the used shouts, if you haven't already. 

• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 24, 2014

  Excellent idea! I'll do that. It fits in very well. :)

  Excellent idea! I'll do that. It fits in very well. :)
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  April 24, 2014

  I had something similar to this in progress but never went through with it. I think this is more original than what I could have done, your use of Frenzy makes it more viable and I like the outfit. Good job

  I had something similar to this in progress but never went through with it. I think this is more original than what I could have done, your use of Frenzy makes it more viable and I like the outfit. Good job

• Garkus (Umbra)

  

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  April 24, 2014

  I'm glad you like it! I love nothing more toon this character than simply not fighting. Its funny watching allies turn on each other. I pulled an entire mine full of bandits, bottled them all up, and frenzied them. The chief killed them all, and barely had any health left. Removed his head from his shoulders.

  I'm glad you like it! I love nothing more toon this character than simply not fighting. Its funny watching allies turn on each other. I pulled an entire mine full of bandits, bottled them all up, and frenzied them. The chief killed them all, and barely had any health left. Removed his head from his shoulders.