Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
DeltaFox said:Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
That's a nice added touch (but now I'm worried I'm illiterate as I thought it was organised fine...), it's little quirks like that that make everthing seem mor believable.
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Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
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That's a nice added touch (but now I'm worried I'm illiterate as I thought it was organised fine...), it's little quirks like that that make everthing seem mor believable.
DeltaFox said:Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
That's a nice added touch (but now I'm worried I'm illiterate as I thought it was organised fine...), it's little quirks like that that make everthing seem mor believable.
[blockquote][b][url=/profile/D3LTAFOX]DeltaFox[/url] said:[/b]
Thanks, Zonn. It may seem like the sentences are unorganized, but since I'm writting from Tyron's perspective, he doesn't actually give a shit about grammar. He's just trying to kill some time.
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That's a nice added touch (but now I'm worried I'm illiterate as I thought it was organised fine...), it's little quirks like that that make everthing seem mor believable.
The newest entry is good, Delta. You've shown us his interests while setting up a future RP point in his plans to return to the Dwemer tower, and you've also dropped a few words of wisdom that seem like they're a code of the order or part of his training - never leave your gear behind. Stuff like that is compelling, especially when presented organically in this style, occasionally interspersed in the narrative.
The newest entry is good, Delta. You've shown us his interests while setting up a future RP point in his plans to return to the Dwemer tower, and you've also dropped a few words of wisdom that seem like they're a code of the order or part of his training - never leave your gear behind. Stuff like that is compelling, especially when presented organically in this style, occasionally interspersed in the narrative.