Despite the fact that several other people have commented about their dislike for the mass amounts of text, personally I really enjoyed reading through your character's story. After all, without the story and roleplay this is a very simple build that I wouldn't think to play myself. The story and roleplay, however, adds a new dimension that gives me the desire to play out the rest of this character's story. Nice job, especially with the backstory for how he ended up in Helgen.
Despite the fact that several other people have commented about their dislike for the mass amounts of text, personally I really enjoyed reading through your character's story. After all, without the story and roleplay this is a very simple build that I wouldn't think to play myself. The story and roleplay, however, adds a new dimension that gives me the desire to play out the rest of this character's story. Nice job, especially with the backstory for how he ended up in Helgen.