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  • YorkistViking DC
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    March 3, 2015

    Gallas's Search for the Dwemer

    This is to explore the life of Gallas Lenil and his adventures to find the elusive Dwemer. (You pronounce his name as Gal-las Len-il).

    Table of Contents

    I.Introduction

    II.Chapter 1

    III.Chapter 2

     

  • YorkistViking DC
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    March 3, 2015

    i need help with the 2 chapter plz give me your suggestions. i want your input. this story is for the whole community to join in on.

  • Okan-Zeeus
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    March 4, 2015

    You should post this as a blog, not a discussion. We use discussions to act as Tables of Contents for our stories.

    Check out this post for more info, or feel free to ask me or Boro anything. 

    On the subject of your actual work, I have a couple of questions for you:

    1. Who are you writing this for? (That is, who is your intended audience?)
    2. What kind of story are you trying to write?

    Also, if you're looking for misspellings, you used the word "feint" in the third paragraph. The correct spelling is "faint." (It's stupid, I know.)

  • YorkistViking DC
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    March 4, 2015

    thank u and i just edited the discussion and everything i was just reading the rules so i did what it said. The intended audience is anyone but mostly skyrim fans.