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Teccam's Tales

• Teccam

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Teccam's Tales

  November 2013 » Night on the Border, or: The Crystallurgist  [ 11/5 ]

  • In which a young border guard has one hell of a night at the hands of Skyrim's next great sorcerer.

  Teccam's Tales

  November 2013 » Night on the Border, or: The Crystallurgist  [ 11/5 ]

  • In which a young border guard has one hell of a night at the hands of Skyrim's next great sorcerer.
• Teccam

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Alright guys, this is my first story. Wrote it mostly to help develop the character of my upcoming build for the CB group. I noticed a few other people had done similar stuff, and it seemed like a fun challenge. Let me know if you had any feedback, criticism, questions, etc. I hope this follow the group's rules. 

  Alright guys, this is my first story. Wrote it mostly to help develop the character of my upcoming build for the CB group. I noticed a few other people had done similar stuff, and it seemed like a fun challenge. Let me know if you had any feedback, criticism, questions, etc. I hope this follow the group's rules. 

• Vazgen

  

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  November 5, 2013

  You should post it as a blog post. Then you create a table of contents page in Story Corner with the name starting with your own, something like "Teccam's Adventures" and link the blog in it  The naming ensures your table of contents end in the alphabetical order in the group's pages. 

  You should post it as a blog post. Then you create a table of contents page in Story Corner with the name starting with your own, something like "Teccam's Adventures" and link the blog in it  The naming ensures your table of contents end in the alphabetical order in the group's pages. 

• Teccam

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Thanks for the tip, Vaz. I don't really have plans for a part 2 at this point. Is that still necessary if this is a standalone/one-off?

  Thanks for the tip, Vaz. I don't really have plans for a part 2 at this point. Is that still necessary if this is a standalone/one-off?

• Vazgen

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Even if you don't plan to continue this story you might write something else in the future. The table of contents is for all your stories  Check this one out, for example: Link 

  Even if you don't plan to continue this story you might write something else in the future. The table of contents is for all your stories  Check this one out, for example: Link 

• Teccam

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Alright, I'll get on that right now. And if you get a chance to read the story, I'd love some feedback!

  Alright, I'll get on that right now. And if you get a chance to read the story, I'd love some feedback!

• Vazgen

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Sure, just repost it as a blog and I'll comment there  One thing for a start I can suggest is that maybe change the font? This one doesn't really work well for long text paragraphs. When broken with images like in builds it works great but here it's kind of hard to read 

  Sure, just repost it as a blog and I'll comment there  One thing for a start I can suggest is that maybe change the font? This one doesn't really work well for long text paragraphs. When broken with images like in builds it works great but here it's kind of hard to read 

• Vazgen

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Forget about font, it's the size that was the issue  I suggest putting some meat in the table of contents. Arma was recently purging one-line threads. Raising the Bar

  Forget about font, it's the size that was the issue  I suggest putting some meat in the table of contents. Arma was recently purging one-line threads. Raising the Bar

• Teccam

  

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  November 5, 2013

  Thanks for the help, Vaz. I made the blog, and though I'm not sure a single data field can rightly be called a table, I've put together the makings of a table of contents. Threw in a brief description without giving anything away. Anything else I can do to make sure it meets the group standards?

  Thanks for the help, Vaz. I made the blog, and though I'm not sure a single data field can rightly be called a table, I've put together the makings of a table of contents. Threw in a brief description without giving anything away. Anything else I can do to make sure it meets the group standards?

• Vazgen

  

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  November 5, 2013

  I think you're good. Of course, you can expand more, like maybe detail the character a little, but at this point it's hard to do without spoiling the build I guess. You can add that section after the build is posted though. Check out Arma's Seventh Path presentation, for example: Link.

  I think you're good. Of course, you can expand more, like maybe detail the character a little, but at this point it's hard to do without spoiling the build I guess. You can add that section after the build is posted though. Check out Arma's Seventh Path presentation, for example: Link.