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Character Build: The Pirate Lord

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  • Malthael
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    January 2, 2014

    +1 for actually taking the time to fix this build up. As ShinJin said, a lot of people just leave their build if it's not good, so good job to you.

    I really like the backstory, no Thalmor/vampire/bandits killed your parents and suddenly you become a master swordsman in 5 seconds, slaughter them all and are now on a quest to rid the world of said Thalmor/vampires/bandits.

    I would definitely head to the art group for a perk spread and maybe add a couple of pics from deviantart or thraen to spice things up.

    Overall the build looks much better, good job!

  • Oneness
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    January 3, 2014

    I see a big difference here. Only comments I have left are clean up the spacing at the end and go to the Art Group and ask for someone to help make you a perk spread picture, unless you can do it yourself. You have earned my "like" for actually taking the initiative to change what we have all suggested so bravo 

  • Oneness
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    January 3, 2014

    Btw! You should unlike the build. It is against the rules to "like" your own build.

  • ShinJin
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    January 7, 2014

    Here are a couple Perk Spreads: they were, admittedly, rushed, so if anything needs fixing please let me know

    Level 20 Perk Spread

    and

    Level 50 Perk Spread

    Again, let me know if anything needs to be changed.

  • Rulanin
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    January 7, 2014

    Ok this is the last time I edit this. SOOO this is the final draft. Tell me what you think

  • ShinJin
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    January 7, 2014
    Much, much better--way to keep at it!

    The 5th sentence of your roleplay section might confuse people though (you called him Hemik instead of Monias... And it should be "you're" instead of your ;)).

    Again, you've really turned this build around. Good work! :)

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