This needs a bit of work...
Have you read any guides before posting? That's recommended. Also, you'll need to give the group rules a quick read, as that'll let you know how the group works. Right now your build is in danger of being "featured" (which means it will have 24 hours until it gets deleted) as it lacks several key components (namely perks).
I'd advocate giving some Legendary builds a read, to get an idea about how things should look. Remember, the whole point of posting a build is to get people to play it; otherwise it's just a waste in my opinion. So, you've really gotta sell it! Let us know why this is the best god damn thing in the world, and why we should just drop everything and get playing right away!
I spot a couple of issues too. Firstly, why would the leader of the dragon priests kill every dragon priest (which is required to get Kohnariik). Secondly, you've got into the trap of three crafting skills; it's a bore, and nobody wants to spend that much time grinding. Try to limit it to one or at most two.
Speaking of excessive crafting, this build strikes me as being very OP. Try toning it down a bit, as it gets boring playing in god mode.
Also, your special moves are kinda.. not special. Special moves should be combos critical to the build's survival, not gimmicky or just thrown in for the fun of it. Where's the synergy in casting Flame Cloak, Fire Storm and Fireball? Why bother with two close ranged AoE attacks if you're going to follow them up with a ranged attack?
Finally, gameplay could do with some work. Run us through some combat encounters; how do we fight warriors, mages, archers, dragons, etc?
This needs a bit of work...
Have you read any guides before posting? That's recommended. Also, you'll need to give the group rules a quick read, as that'll let you know how the group works. Right now your build is in danger of being "featured" (which means it will have 24 hours until it gets deleted) as it lacks several key components (namely perks).
I'd advocate giving some Legendary builds a read, to get an idea about how things should look. Remember, the whole point of posting a build is to get people to play it; otherwise it's just a waste in my opinion. So, you've really gotta sell it! Let us know why this is the best god damn thing in the world, and why we should just drop everything and get playing right away!
I spot a couple of issues too. Firstly, why would the leader of the dragon priests kill every dragon priest (which is required to get Kohnariik). Secondly, you've got into the trap of three crafting skills; it's a bore, and nobody wants to spend that much time grinding. Try to limit it to one or at most two.
Speaking of excessive crafting, this build strikes me as being very OP. Try toning it down a bit, as it gets boring playing in god mode.
Also, your special moves are kinda.. not special. Special moves should be combos critical to the build's survival, not gimmicky or just thrown in for the fun of it. Where's the synergy in casting Flame Cloak, Fire Storm and Fireball? Why bother with two close ranged AoE attacks if you're going to follow them up with a ranged attack?
Finally, gameplay could do with some work. Run us through some combat encounters; how do we fight warriors, mages, archers, dragons, etc?
