This turned out great Bryn! The combo for the armor looks great together, and it made use of some things in the game you don't see too often such as the Temple Robes and the Dragon Hunting quests.
This turned out great Bryn! The combo for the armor looks great together, and it made use of some things in the game you don't see too often such as the Temple Robes and the Dragon Hunting quests.
I hope you don't take this the wrong way Bryn, but I don't think I can give it a like right now. I like the gear, and I like the images, but it just seems very ... mundane. What sets this build apart from the crowd? What are the unique gameplay and lore elements that drive him?
Maybe you could talk more about the apparent handicap of wearing armored gauntlets and boots without a helm or chestpiece. If you ever forget to cast your flesh spell, how long can you last? What are your contingency measures?
It seems like this build is meant to revolve around Shouts and Draconic lore, but I'm just not really seeing that in action. It doesn't look like you've done anything to augment your shouts or to diminish their cooldown, whichd isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it seems a bit contradictory to the purpose as I see it. How do you balance all those Shouts, how do you prioritize which ones to use?
Also, a perk spread image would be a nice addition. And maybe more smaller images to break up the blocks of text, rather than just big images, big text blocks, repeating ad nauseum.
Overall, I think there's potential here for you to make this a lot more interesting and impressive. You know a lot about the game and you have a great foundation here. It would feel like a bit of a waste if you didn't invest a bit more time and effort into the write-up.
I hope you don't take this the wrong way Bryn, but I don't think I can give it a like right now. I like the gear, and I like the images, but it just seems very ... mundane. What sets this build apart from the crowd? What are the unique gameplay and lore elements that drive him?
Maybe you could talk more about the apparent handicap of wearing armored gauntlets and boots without a helm or chestpiece. If you ever forget to cast your flesh spell, how long can you last? What are your contingency measures?
It seems like this build is meant to revolve around Shouts and Draconic lore, but I'm just not really seeing that in action. It doesn't look like you've done anything to augment your shouts or to diminish their cooldown, whichd isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it seems a bit contradictory to the purpose as I see it. How do you balance all those Shouts, how do you prioritize which ones to use?
Also, a perk spread image would be a nice addition. And maybe more smaller images to break up the blocks of text, rather than just big images, big text blocks, repeating ad nauseum.
Overall, I think there's potential here for you to make this a lot more interesting and impressive. You know a lot about the game and you have a great foundation here. It would feel like a bit of a waste if you didn't invest a bit more time and effort into the write-up.