Honra "O odiado" Deber (Honor "The Hated" Duty) the 4th-Character Backstory


  • 25 years before the events of Skyrim a young Argonian child emerged into the world. His life wasn't an easy one. With the death of his father, the leader of the Cyrodil Mages Guild, he and his mother moved to the Skyrim town of Riften. Born with magical prowess of his father Honra was taken away by the College of Winterhold at the age of 2. His mother tried to stop them from taking him but she was killed by the kidnappers. When he completed his training at the College and was told of how he came to be there he went into a fit of rage and killed 2 teachers and 5 of his fellow students. He was cast out of the College and was thrown into jail. At the age of 21 he was imprisoned in a dank cell and remained there for about 3 months. He baited one of the guards into entering his cell where he then seared the guard into ash. He took the key and ran away. On his way out of the prison he killed 11 guards. After two years of searching the the College of Winterhold hired the Companion's mage-hunter platoon to track Honra down. While he was asleep in a stolen tent Honra was attacked by 10 heavily armed warriors wearing equipment enchanted to reflect spells back onto the user. Honra fought them for several hours using gurilla warfare,placing traps, and summoning creatures for ambushes but was eventually overpowered and sent back to jail. He was sentenced to death by beheading but then later escaped and felt the call of the Dragons.

     

     

     

    Please be gentle this is my first time writing a story like this. P.S Not my picture made by UncleHappy5 on Deviant Art

Comments

6 Comments
  • Honra Deber
    Honra Deber   ·  October 30, 2011
    There we are. I used that name in all of the TES games I played and I used sneak, destruction, conjuration, blade/short weapon so I think that'll work better.
  • The Nexus
    The Nexus   ·  October 30, 2011
    A little. There's still the part about the figthing 10 guys for several hours with a frickin hunting knife. Fighting is pretty exhausting and 10 people are still a lot of people. Had it been 2 guys for maybe 1 hour I would have been ok with it. Again, nee...  more
  • Honra Deber
    Honra Deber   ·  October 30, 2011
    There fixed and much more realistic is that better Nexus?
     
  • The Nexus
    The Nexus   ·  October 30, 2011
    Too much Mary Sue. 80 guards? Usrs? That's just not possible. Think about it, it just doesn't make any sense whatsoever. I bet there's not even that many guards in the prison. Unless it's a REALLY big prison, but still, he wouldn't possibly be able to pul...  more
  • Honra Deber
    Honra Deber   ·  October 30, 2011
    Thanks man thats nice of you to say.
     
  • Steven C. Wagner
    Steven C. Wagner   ·  October 30, 2011
    very good story! im not much of a bac-story person (just really enjoy the games) but i thought this was very excellent...i highly suggest you start writing more...you're very good at it. and btw..tell the artist on DA i thought he did an excellent job on ...  more