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The Old Orc - Chapter 6

  • Posted by William Perkins May 2, 2013 - 552 views

    Fought through Fort Greymoor today. My good death was so close. I have cleared the fort of its nasty inhabitants, and have lived to tell the story. Some of the bandits used magic to try to kill me. Such trickery is looked down upon by Malacath.

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  • William Perkins
    William Perkins   ·  May 3, 2013
    Thanks Raspy. I am new to this so your praise is greatly appreciated. 
  • Raspy
    Raspy   ·  May 3, 2013
    I really like the Old Orc idea. The accounts have been fun to read. You could combine a few to make each a bit longer. I eagerly await the next chapter. Cheers!
  • William Perkins
    William Perkins   ·  May 3, 2013
    Thank you so much for the feedback Dom! I'm glad you like it. I will continue as I play.
  • Dom Valerius
    Dom Valerius   ·  May 3, 2013
    Hey William,
    I like your idea of the Orc and his travels but I think you should put more detail and have a much longer story for each chapter. Go through day by day and write things like the fights and what else you did during the day 
    I am on...  more