The Beginning of the End

• Posted by Nicholas July 3, 2013 - 851 views

  Running...keep running...don't look back...they're getting closer...almost to the riv-

   

  Woke up with a bad headache...where am I?

  Well, not where you want to be, that's for sure, said another prisoner.

  Look, when I get out I wi-

  No you won't, this is the end-there's Helgen

  Helgen? Is that a prison?

  Its the end of the line...execution...

  What?? But why?

  You were there, right? At the ambush?

  Well yes, I think I hurt my head and everything went black and I ended up here...

  The pain won't last, you won't be alive another fifteen minutes.

   

  When I saw Helgen for the first time, and probably the last, it was amazing, I would have spoken up about my amazement if I wasn't  to  be executed in a short while. My parents had died so at least I knew I would see them.

   

  10 minutes later

  It was my turn to be called...

   

  Name? asked the soldier

  Toldi

   

  I wasn't on the list but was condemned to die...for what? I hadn't killed anyone, it was like just being there was enough...

  My turn...but wait, a dragon?? No, this can't be happening!

  Soldiers were dying around me, I have to get to safety!!

  The tower! of course!

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  This was my first blog, don't want to make them long but good enough to leave suspense, tell me what you think and any changes I can make, but don't be harsh since I'm new at this :)

  If you could comment after reading I would REALLY appreciate it so I can take your thoughts into consideration with next post