Journeys Of Dalorn 01: Beginnings

  • Anyone should be able to live in peace. A simple truth, yet hard to fully grasp in your life. I, well, I'm not so blessed. You see, war follows in my wake anywhere I go. I try to have no part in it, but war is something that takes root deep down, not just in the world, but in the heart. War is inside of me, attacking my very soul, both weakening and strengthening me as a person. It's destroying my mind, ravaging my conscience. I never know when the attacks come, but I've nearly died on many occasions due to them. I have been wandering the lands of Tamriel since my parents abandoned me the fourth time the curse, as I like to call it, struck at fourteen. I am a lone wolf now; friends are made but are always abandoned due to the ever more frequent attacks, hence the reason I have given up on allies. But the past is gone, and the present is what matters. My idea is simple: cross the border to Skyrim and make myself another new life, where none have heard my name. So the journey begins...

    I had such bad luck, crossing into an Imperial ambush. War found me once again, it seems. We were led to a town called Helgen. I heard a scream, almost a second before my inevitable death, not like anything I had ever heard, and before the dragon hit, the 'curse' struck. I became an unrelenting fireball of arcane fury, flinging spells I didn't know existed that even if I did would be far beyond my skill level in all directions. The headsman disentigrated instantly, along with my binds. The black dragon fled, but the citizens weren't so lucky. When my flames petered out, I fled west to the forest in the distance, hoping to forget what I'd done, and never see civilization again.

    Just a beginning, more a concept than anything. Please tell me if you want more!

Comments

5 Comments
  • ricardo maia
    ricardo maia   ·  April 18, 2012
    Yes - I liked the short and direct approach. I would be gratefull if you kept it coming and kept it short - sometimes I loose focus on reading very long posts. I`m guessing the character is some kind of mercenary who is tired of war and tries uselessly to...  more
  • Phoenix The Fiery
    Phoenix The Fiery   ·  April 17, 2012
    Thanks for the encouragement! I'm getting started on more depth and feeling to the character right away. I'll try to crank the next post out ASAP. I'm so exited!
  • Kynareth
    Kynareth   ·  April 17, 2012
    Please do continue, Fallen Elf!  This curse is very intriguing, and I agree with Bilal...it made Alduin run!?  This sounds crazy and amazing--and that automatically makes it an interesting and good story to read!  
  • Phoenix The Fiery
    Phoenix The Fiery   ·  April 17, 2012
    Thanks, I loved your post as well. I wish I would have had a longer time to write and develop the character (two year olds's are demanding). It didn't take as long as I thought it would at all. Expect another tomorrow!
  • Arnen
    Arnen   ·  April 17, 2012
    I really like the idea and want to know how his story ends   Keep going!