I'm eagerly awaiting this project's completion. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.
By the way, if Sevria is asked about her past, she'll have to detail the downfall and present status of her chief; how he went from being a wise and honorable soul, to a barbaric murderer that took the law into his own hands on a one-man vendetta against the Thalmor. Basically I'd want for Sevria's description of him to be intimidating, sort of giving him a "wild untamed killer in the woods with the strength of 10 men" vibe. Someone that could easily be just as dangerous as a Dremora -- if, by chance, they cross his path.
(Oh, and here's a little trivia: Marudil and Sevria come from a tribe in Valenwood that calls themselves 'Silvenar'... but to the Altmer and the races of men, they're known by another name: Apache. )