Hey Legion. As promised Im here to deliver some advice that should help make this build even more appealing. Before we begin let me just say that 55 likes on your very first build is nothing short of amazing. This build has been more positively received than I could have ever anticipated.
To start, I suggest left indentation on your paragraphs. Center indentation leaves all this awkward white space in a build which detract from its overall presentation. Speaking of space, the two pictures featuring primary and secondary skills, while artistic do not really tell us much for all the space they take up. Perhaps make them smaller or merge them with the section where you discuss the skills.
This being such a roleplay heavy character, I'd like to see more info on the quests you did. The curator concept is an awesome one so definitely go into much greater detail as to what you added to your museum. There's so much you can justify doing as a collector. The daedric/aedric artifacts, rare weapons, treasures, books to be preserved before those neanderthal-like Nords burn them all. The list goes on. Theres so much more depth that can be put into the quest section.
Thats all I have and I hope this has helped.
Hey Legion. As promised Im here to deliver some advice that should help make this build even more appealing. Before we begin let me just say that 55 likes on your very first build is nothing short of amazing. This build has been more positively received than I could have ever anticipated.
To start, I suggest left indentation on your paragraphs. Center indentation leaves all this awkward white space in a build which detract from its overall presentation. Speaking of space, the two pictures featuring primary and secondary skills, while artistic do not really tell us much for all the space they take up. Perhaps make them smaller or merge them with the section where you discuss the skills.
This being such a roleplay heavy character, I'd like to see more info on the quests you did. The curator concept is an awesome one so definitely go into much greater detail as to what you added to your museum. There's so much you can justify doing as a collector. The daedric/aedric artifacts, rare weapons, treasures, books to be preserved before those neanderthal-like Nords burn them all. The list goes on. Theres so much more depth that can be put into the quest section.
Thats all I have and I hope this has helped.