Ok I think I understand this build better now.
Personally I don't like that you leave too much "freedom" for the build. Tell us how this character is played by you, and when someone gets exited enough to try it out it should be clear that we can change the things we want.
Like the whole vampirism thing.. It's not specific enough to just say "join or don't join" in a CB, but rather why this character joined or didn't join.
Ok I think I understand this build better now.
Personally I don't like that you leave too much "freedom" for the build. Tell us how this character is played by you, and when someone gets exited enough to try it out it should be clear that we can change the things we want.
Like the whole vampirism thing.. It's not specific enough to just say "join or don't join" in a CB, but rather why this character joined or didn't join.