Fixed the mechanical errors and you had quite a few issues with tense because, I think, you were confused about some elements of first person narrative. I fixed those.
How old is this guy? Was just curious, as that would put him, not sure? Did he train when he was very young, like a shadowscale? At the very least, if he was trained as a shadowscale, he'd be close to 70 by the beginning of Skyrim?
Fixed the mechanical errors and you had quite a few issues with tense because, I think, you were confused about some elements of first person narrative. I fixed those.
How old is this guy? Was just curious, as that would put him, not sure? Did he train when he was very young, like a shadowscale? At the very least, if he was trained as a shadowscale, he'd be close to 70 by the beginning of Skyrim?