Great build, GF! Every time I bump in to a blood mage (which is actually pretty rare) I always gauge it by how much it creeps me out... this guy is pretty freaking creepy!
The backstory establishes that evil blood mage vibe right away, helps the reader envision just what this lizard is all about, and even explains the mechanics behind the build all at the same time. Often backstory becomes a kind of filler, but you use it quite effectively in this case.
This is a succinct, excellently presented, and fun read; again, great job on this!
Great build, GF! Every time I bump in to a blood mage (which is actually pretty rare) I always gauge it by how much it creeps me out... this guy is pretty freaking creepy!
The backstory establishes that evil blood mage vibe right away, helps the reader envision just what this lizard is all about, and even explains the mechanics behind the build all at the same time. Often backstory becomes a kind of filler, but you use it quite effectively in this case.
This is a succinct, excellently presented, and fun read; again, great job on this!