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Character Build: The Crazed Scars

• Raven

  

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  January 25, 2016

  
  There once was a poor khajiit, yes, a poor khajiit. His name is yet unknown. His face covered in the scars of both of his old memories and battles. Some say, he fought the most fearsome beasts. He was destined to be a Mane, a leader. The khajiit was the child of a wealthy group of merchants. When the crazed khajiit was only a boy, he witnessed his family torn part by greed. His caravan mates would plant drugs and other illegal substances in the cities on one another to send each other to jail. He would praise his beloved moons to show light to his family during this dark time. On his fourteenth birthday, he witnessed his beloved moons, Masser and Secunda, vanish from the dark night sky. For two years, the young khajiit was driven to madness. He lost the moons, the only thing that seemed the only lights in the dark to him. He ran off to "search" for his lost moons... Due to his lack of knowledge, the khajiit spent his time stealing and murdering  for food.

  Two years later, the Thalmor came along... and so did the lost moons. As the Thalmor claiming that they used magic to bring back the moons, the khajiit knew better. The khajiit stalked a group of Thalmor and listened closely. The Thalmor solider said to the wizard, "They cats will believe anything as long as you say the word 'moon' in it!" The group began to laugh louder and louder. The khajiit snapped and leaped from the shadows. The khajiit used his lethal claws to tear apart the solider. He turned quickly and grabbed a steel dagger of the body and used it to murder the other Thalmor. The wizard shot a puff of fire into the khajiit's face, blinding him permanently. As he finished tearing apart the Thalmor, he praised the moons for their mercy. He only heard a strange voice that said, "Madness is a mercy, perhaps, but a mercy nonetheless." After those words, the khajiit fumbled around, looking for something to calm his nerves. His hands grazed upon something. He opened his mouth and clamped down on it, soon tasting blood. The khajiit soon realized he was eating one of the dead Thalmor, but he didn't care. He chewed off all the flesh off of one and went onto the next body. As he was feasting, he heard a muffled scream. All he could do was hiss and continue eating. After the khajiit hissed, the frantic being left him alone to finish his meal.

  It was not until a few days later when the young lad spent the night at a local tavern when he received his scars. A young tavern wench accidentally dropped a bottle of mead near the fire, when the bottle made contact with the ground, it broke. The bottle left a puddle of the cheap mead on the floor. The khajiit helped the tavern wench pick up the pieces of glass off the floor. When the tavern wench looked him in the eyes to thank him, she froze. She smiled weakly and ran out side. In only a matter of time, city guards came running in. One guard held a torch as he ran in, the clumsy guard slipped and fell into the puddle of wine. The torch landed in the mead. Flames suddenly engulfed the building, consuming the poor khajiit with it. The flames burnt scars into his flesh and mind.

  When the khajiit escaped the flames, he heard the voice telling him to go to Skyrim to have fun...

  Race: Khajiit

  Gender: Male

  Stats...(magicka optional if you are going to use magic) 3/4/3

  Skills...

  Major: One-Handed, Heavy Armor, Sneak

  Minor: Enchanting, Smithing, Illusion (optional), Destruction (optional)

  Recommend Perks-

  One-handed: Armsman 5/5, Fighting Stance

  Sneak: Stealth 5/5, Silent Roll, Back stab

  Heavy Armor: Juggernaut 5/5, Conditioning

  

  Gear:

  -Steel Plate Armor

  -Steel Plate Boots

  -Steel Plate Gauntlets

  -Wabbajack

  -Steel Dagger

  -Ring of Namira

  Factions:

  Dark Brotherhood: To put any liars in the Void

  Thieves Guild: To steal shiny things of course

  Stormcloaks: To destroy any Thalmor lair or pretender

  Dawnguard: To protect the sun, the sun's light makes the moons shine

  Game-Play: Be crazy, lost, and wild. You will use both the Wabbajack and the steel dagger to slice and dice your enemies apart... and do not forget to have fun.

  Combat:

  Dragons-Use a combination of shouts (magic is optional) if the dragon is either in the air or far off. If it is close and landed on the ground, then use your dagger to slice it to pieces

  Bandits-Slice 'n' Dice them, and don't forget to use the Wabbajack

  Draugr/Undead-The Wabbajack will be heavily used for the un-dead to prevent any chance of catching diseases and to also turn them into cute bunnies and or slice 'n' dice.

  Bunnies-Wabbajack

  Random NPCs-Wabbajack and dagger

  Appearance:  The Crazed Scars' appearance will be messy. His blind eyes, long messy hair, and scarred fur will show his horrid mental state. The steel plate armor and jewelry shows his mental state before his mental break down.
  

  Goals: 

  To find the real reasons for the moons disappearance

  To destroy the Thalmor

  To destroy any lairs and or pretenders

  To taste the blood of your enemies

  
  There once was a poor khajiit, yes, a poor khajiit. His name is yet unknown. His face covered in the scars of both of his old memories and battles. Some say, he fought the most fearsome beasts. He was destined to be a Mane, a leader. The khajiit was the child of a wealthy group of merchants. When the crazed khajiit was only a boy, he witnessed his family torn part by greed. His caravan mates would plant drugs and other illegal substances in the cities on one another to send each other to jail. He would praise his beloved moons to show light to his family during this dark time. On his fourteenth birthday, he witnessed his beloved moons, Masser and Secunda, vanish from the dark night sky. For two years, the young khajiit was driven to madness. He lost the moons, the only thing that seemed the only lights in the dark to him. He ran off to "search" for his lost moons... Due to his lack of knowledge, the khajiit spent his time stealing and murdering  for food.

  Two years later, the Thalmor came along... and so did the lost moons. As the Thalmor claiming that they used magic to bring back the moons, the khajiit knew better. The khajiit stalked a group of Thalmor and listened closely. The Thalmor solider said to the wizard, "They cats will believe anything as long as you say the word 'moon' in it!" The group began to laugh louder and louder. The khajiit snapped and leaped from the shadows. The khajiit used his lethal claws to tear apart the solider. He turned quickly and grabbed a steel dagger of the body and used it to murder the other Thalmor. The wizard shot a puff of fire into the khajiit's face, blinding him permanently. As he finished tearing apart the Thalmor, he praised the moons for their mercy. He only heard a strange voice that said, "Madness is a mercy, perhaps, but a mercy nonetheless." After those words, the khajiit fumbled around, looking for something to calm his nerves. His hands grazed upon something. He opened his mouth and clamped down on it, soon tasting blood. The khajiit soon realized he was eating one of the dead Thalmor, but he didn't care. He chewed off all the flesh off of one and went onto the next body. As he was feasting, he heard a muffled scream. All he could do was hiss and continue eating. After the khajiit hissed, the frantic being left him alone to finish his meal.

  It was not until a few days later when the young lad spent the night at a local tavern when he received his scars. A young tavern wench accidentally dropped a bottle of mead near the fire, when the bottle made contact with the ground, it broke. The bottle left a puddle of the cheap mead on the floor. The khajiit helped the tavern wench pick up the pieces of glass off the floor. When the tavern wench looked him in the eyes to thank him, she froze. She smiled weakly and ran out side. In only a matter of time, city guards came running in. One guard held a torch as he ran in, the clumsy guard slipped and fell into the puddle of wine. The torch landed in the mead. Flames suddenly engulfed the building, consuming the poor khajiit with it. The flames burnt scars into his flesh and mind.

  When the khajiit escaped the flames, he heard the voice telling him to go to Skyrim to have fun...

  Race: Khajiit

  Gender: Male

  Stats...(magicka optional if you are going to use magic) 3/4/3

  Skills...

  Major: One-Handed, Heavy Armor, Sneak

  Minor: Enchanting, Smithing, Illusion (optional), Destruction (optional)

  Recommend Perks-

  One-handed: Armsman 5/5, Fighting Stance

  Sneak: Stealth 5/5, Silent Roll, Back stab

  Heavy Armor: Juggernaut 5/5, Conditioning

  

  Gear:

  -Steel Plate Armor

  -Steel Plate Boots

  -Steel Plate Gauntlets

  -Wabbajack

  -Steel Dagger

  -Ring of Namira

  Factions:

  Dark Brotherhood: To put any liars in the Void

  Thieves Guild: To steal shiny things of course

  Stormcloaks: To destroy any Thalmor lair or pretender

  Dawnguard: To protect the sun, the sun's light makes the moons shine

  Game-Play: Be crazy, lost, and wild. You will use both the Wabbajack and the steel dagger to slice and dice your enemies apart... and do not forget to have fun.

  Combat:

  Dragons-Use a combination of shouts (magic is optional) if the dragon is either in the air or far off. If it is close and landed on the ground, then use your dagger to slice it to pieces

  Bandits-Slice 'n' Dice them, and don't forget to use the Wabbajack

  Draugr/Undead-The Wabbajack will be heavily used for the un-dead to prevent any chance of catching diseases and to also turn them into cute bunnies and or slice 'n' dice.

  Bunnies-Wabbajack

  Random NPCs-Wabbajack and dagger

  Appearance:  The Crazed Scars' appearance will be messy. His blind eyes, long messy hair, and scarred fur will show his horrid mental state. The steel plate armor and jewelry shows his mental state before his mental break down.
  

  Goals: 

  To find the real reasons for the moons disappearance

  To destroy the Thalmor

  To destroy any lairs and or pretenders

  To taste the blood of your enemies

• Albino

  

  Member
   

  January 26, 2016

  Hi Raven! As per the CB Group minimum requirements, all builds posted here must have a gameplay section. While you have one, technically speaking, it's only two sentences long and tells us very little about how to actually play the character. As such, I must ask you to expand upon it. Tell us more about how your character handles combat. In the meantime, I have to feature this. That means you have 24 hours to expand upon your gameplay section or this gets deleted. Good luck!

  Hi Raven! As per the CB Group minimum requirements, all builds posted here must have a gameplay section. While you have one, technically speaking, it's only two sentences long and tells us very little about how to actually play the character. As such, I must ask you to expand upon it. Tell us more about how your character handles combat. In the meantime, I have to feature this. That means you have 24 hours to expand upon your gameplay section or this gets deleted. Good luck!

• Parabola

  

  Member
   

  January 26, 2016

  Also you might want to brighten the pictures up a bit. On my device the first one is just a big black box and I can only see the moon and the spell effect in the other two. I wasn't even sure the first one had loaded until I saw the second.

  Also you might want to brighten the pictures up a bit. On my device the first one is just a big black box and I can only see the moon and the spell effect in the other two. I wasn't even sure the first one had loaded until I saw the second.
• Raven

  

  Member
   

  January 26, 2016

  Thanks for the tip, I will work on it.

  Thanks for the tip, I will work on it.

• Raven

  

  Member
   

  January 26, 2016

  Thank you for the heads up!

  Thank you for the heads up!

• Ry Willams

  

  Member
   

  January 27, 2016

  Truth be told. I think you would be better at posting stories rather than builds. Reason is, the backstory in your builds is the only section that has a good amount of detail and substance. It is also simplistically presented in a decent way. In a character build, it takes more effort and work to put that same amount of detail in the rest of the sections. Before starting a next build, look at other builds first to get an idea on being more descriptive on your other categories. Best of luck and, always know you have plenty of help!

  Truth be told. I think you would be better at posting stories rather than builds. Reason is, the backstory in your builds is the only section that has a good amount of detail and substance. It is also simplistically presented in a decent way. In a character build, it takes more effort and work to put that same amount of detail in the rest of the sections. Before starting a next build, look at other builds first to get an idea on being more descriptive on your other categories. Best of luck and, always know you have plenty of help!

• Raven

  

  Member
   

  January 27, 2016

  Thanks!

  Thanks!