Man...revisiting this build and the first reply by Parabola reminds me how out of my depth I was on my first build..lol. Anyway, just spent a little time rewriting the entire backstory, doing away with the old "pre-introduction" as not needed any longer. Moved a few items around and tried to streamline the entire presentation. Still a cheap knock off to Mason's Sorcerer build but I like the new backstory and think it gives new light to the inspiration I had to make the build in the first place.
Man...revisiting this build and the first reply by Parabola reminds me how out of my depth I was on my first build..lol. Anyway, just spent a little time rewriting the entire backstory, doing away with the old "pre-introduction" as not needed any longer. Moved a few items around and tried to streamline the entire presentation. Still a cheap knock off to Mason's Sorcerer build but I like the new backstory and think it gives new light to the inspiration I had to make the build in the first place.
I dont quite like the cool text at the top. That shade of green is gross looking, and green in general seems to clash with the rest of the build. Here's a new text image to use if you'd like.
I dont quite like the cool text at the top. That shade of green is gross looking, and green in general seems to clash with the rest of the build. Here's a new text image to use if you'd like.
This is a pretty good build! Definitely has potential. I would however flesh out more of the character via roleplay and questline sections. For example, you could say how the thrall is wary of any and all wizards around her, so she uses poisons that damage magicka as well as enchanting her weapons with drain magicka and her gear with resistance to spells. That would leave the College of Winterhold completely out of the question.
This is a pretty good build! Definitely has potential. I would however flesh out more of the character via roleplay and questline sections. For example, you could say how the thrall is wary of any and all wizards around her, so she uses poisons that damage magicka as well as enchanting her weapons with drain magicka and her gear with resistance to spells. That would leave the College of Winterhold completely out of the question.
Some good thoughts Sarv...thanks. This was my raw effort at building, the very first so no surprise it's not as polished as some of my others. If she survives the Deathmatch I will revisit her and see how those ideas play in with the build. Thanks again!
Some good thoughts Sarv...thanks. This was my raw effort at building, the very first so no surprise it's not as polished as some of my others. If she survives the Deathmatch I will revisit her and see how those ideas play in with the build. Thanks again!