I like your approach to the character by adding new elements like the Vampire Lord form. I like the names of the enchanted gear and overall the idea is good. Here and there are some minor spelling errors, but nonetheless you get +1 from me :)
I like your approach to the character by adding new elements like the Vampire Lord form. I like the names of the enchanted gear and overall the idea is good. Here and there are some minor spelling errors, but nonetheless you get +1 from me :)
I have some advice/criticism that will help push this build in the right direction. I don't want to seem like I'm tearing this build down or picking on you. I just see the potential in this build and want to offer some pointers. Here goes:
The presentation could use some work. The font is inconsistent, and there's too much spacing between paragraphs where there doesn't need to be. The pictures you have for the potions are far bigger than they need to be. The pictures you use for the special moves etc look pretty cool, but that section would look better if the special move pictures had one consistent size.
I suggest elaborating more on the game play. How does the black ranger fair against various enemy types? What is he weak against? What is he strong against? Since you have special techniques listed you should go into how to effectively use them in a fight.
I have more advice and if you're interested we can talk it over via PMs.
I have some advice/criticism that will help push this build in the right direction. I don't want to seem like I'm tearing this build down or picking on you. I just see the potential in this build and want to offer some pointers. Here goes:
The presentation could use some work. The font is inconsistent, and there's too much spacing between paragraphs where there doesn't need to be. The pictures you have for the potions are far bigger than they need to be. The pictures you use for the special moves etc look pretty cool, but that section would look better if the special move pictures had one consistent size.
I suggest elaborating more on the game play. How does the black ranger fair against various enemy types? What is he weak against? What is he strong against? Since you have special techniques listed you should go into how to effectively use them in a fight.
I have more advice and if you're interested we can talk it over via PMs.
I like the backstory and the named enchantments, and for that you get +1 from me. I do have some critisism/ideas however that might make it slightly better, or just to think about for your next build. My main gripe is that it seems too unfocused in the way of skills and quests. Like you are trying to do everything. It might be right for this build, but personally i prefer builds with a more focused skillset and set of quests. Maybe it is because you are high level that you have (almost) all the guilds included. Other than that I really like the named stuff, be it enchantments or potions.
Keep posting builds man, i enjoy reading them!
I like the backstory and the named enchantments, and for that you get +1 from me. I do have some critisism/ideas however that might make it slightly better, or just to think about for your next build. My main gripe is that it seems too unfocused in the way of skills and quests. Like you are trying to do everything. It might be right for this build, but personally i prefer builds with a more focused skillset and set of quests. Maybe it is because you are high level that you have (almost) all the guilds included. Other than that I really like the named stuff, be it enchantments or potions.
Keep posting builds man, i enjoy reading them!