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Contest Build: The Renegade

Tags: #Character Build Warrior  #Character Build Alchemist  #Character Build Villain  #Race:Imperial  #Rank:Recognized  #Contest4 
  • January 30, 2016
    A small amount of my inspiration for this guy sinultaneously came from Il Duce, from the Boondock Saints. He was a Legate, once, but so long ago nobody remembers him; everybody who knew him as anything other than what he is now, is dead. Their successors kept using him because of how brutally effective he is. Efficient? Not necessarily. But he's equal parts performer as he is assassin; he turns an assassination into a grisly public spectacle.
  • January 30, 2016
    I know what you mean. I don't think I would uave enjoyed it or been able to immerse myself as much if it had been as lighthearted as Oblivion though.
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    January 30, 2016
    I didn't get into oblivion as much as I should have, but it does set the tone fairly well in Skyrim. Dragons and soldiers killing everybody. It should probably feel a little sad haha
  • January 30, 2016
    Just a tad. It's supposed to be a grim place.
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    January 31, 2016
    Very impressive, I love it!
  • January 31, 2016
    Wouldn't have been nearly as nice without you, mate. You have my sincerest thanks.
  • February 7, 2016

    Its a decent build. One flaw I feel sticks out is the inconsistent spacing of the lines. That and the text is quite large as well. 

  • February 7, 2016
    That is easily fixable. Thanks for the input, Curse.
  • February 7, 2016
    Actually, the spacing of the lines, I'm not quite sure what you mean by that. The spacing is pretty damn consistent. If you meant the orientation, it's all uniform; main body text is left alligned, quotes are centered under pictures. Though, your comment did lead me to a picture that is in the wrong spot, and a quote that is thus orphaned. I'll fix that in a momrny.
  • February 7, 2016

    What I mean is some of your paragraphs are double spaced while others are single spaced.