holy crap BlueDremora bringing the awesome creep in waves these days! looks awesome to me!

HAHA, blind man DB (I have rather terrible vision and wear the glasses to help claarify that bit) coming here to help out and say that while I do have some issues reading it, especially along the sides it isn't too bad and unless you get someone coming in who can't read it all, I'd definitely keep it. First, as I've already mention the presentation is flawless, stunning, unique and really well done (I'd thrown in a few other compliments but that covers it) but beyond that is the actual backstory that you've got going so far, it's just, well let's sum it up by saying that you've got a talent for writing that might even outstrip yorur build design, it was just awesome :D.

I'm definitely going to be keeping my eyes set on this  to see updates (if you update it and want some feedback feel free to send a message off and poke me about it) for this because so far I like everything about the build and I can't imagine that not continuing. Is this your first build Dremora? Just checked, not it isn't so obviously I have to go hunt down your other two and read them, consider me a fan mate :D

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Yea, I want to make it readable to everyone and it is no problem to simply-it whatsoever. I think I'll make a blog post with the text in black-and-white and then I'll link it on the build / modder's log itself.

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That would be great :) Definitely keep the graphic as the main thing, because it does stand out and I love the design, but being able to read a plain old text version (heck, even on pastebin or something if that's easier than making a blog post) would be a great help if you can find some way of linking it that doesn't interfere too much with the effect on the main post :) 

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That would be great :) Definitely keep the graphic as the main thing, because it does stand out and I love the design, but being able to read a plain old text version (heck, even on pastebin or something if that's easier than making a blog post) would be a great help if you can find some way of linking it that doesn't interfere too much with the effect on the main post :) 

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I think I'll add redirectional links to blog posts with the text so anyone with trouble reading it can simply click the image and be taken to a blog post with the text from that image.

I think it looks great, but yeah, I'm struggling to read it too, bad eyes and all. I can read it, but I have to concentrate, which sucks because I so on board with the presentation style that I'd say "screw Lis" and do it this way totally. But, if you are going to link to a blog with just text formatting, then cool, just do that. 

Just to be aware though, there are some spelling and grammatical errors, so I'm hoping these images are easy to edit. 

Other than that, yay Eola. She is a fan favorite and the use of spiders will really fit her character. I had a blast with those in my Exterminator build, but I treated them like Dwemer biological weapons. 

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I think I'll add redirectional links to blog posts with the text so anyone with trouble reading it can simply click the image and be taken to a blog post with the text from that image.

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Sounds great :D

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I think it looks great, but yeah, I'm struggling to read it too, bad eyes and all. I can read it, but I have to concentrate, which sucks because I so on board with the presentation style that I'd say "screw Lis" and do it this way totally. But, if you are going to link to a blog with just text formatting, then cool, just do that. 

Just to be aware though, there are some spelling and grammatical errors, so I'm hoping these images are easy to edit. 

Other than that, yay Eola. She is a fan favorite and the use of spiders will really fit her character. I had a blast with those in my Exterminator build, but I treated them like Dwemer biological weapons. 

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Thanks Liss! It was partly your use of images and grhapics that inspired me to try something a bit more... colorful. As for the grammar, I am aware of some mistakes (I cringe at myself sometimes) but I made the images as templates so I'll be able to edit relatively easy. English is my second language (bad excuse, been studying it for 13 years) and my autocorrect dosent seem to work on The Vault but I'll be sure to go through when I'm all done :)

Oh sweet, updates that I've missed. Don't be afraid to bump this as much as you want Blue, the Workshop is really half about bumping stuff at the end of the day (it's hard to get feedback without it sometimes.)

Anyway, I love the new updates, especially you providing a little extra context about who Namira is and what that means for the build, you provided that information in a really good way while still making sure that there's a connection between the information and the build. Sometimes you can see people provide information like a good 500 words on who Talos is but have it seem kind of disconnected somehow (I'm definitely guilty of stuff like that) so it really does impress me to see it done well here. Other then that I'm liking the concept for the character, both from an RP and Gameplay perpsective so far. 

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Oh sweet, updates that I've missed. Don't be afraid to bump this as much as you want Blue, the Workshop is really half about bumping stuff at the end of the day (it's hard to get feedback without it sometimes.)

Anyway, I love the new updates, especially you providing a little extra context about who Namira is and what that means for the build, you provided that information in a really good way while still making sure that there's a connection between the information and the build. Sometimes you can see people provide information like a good 500 words on who Talos is but have it seem kind of disconnected somehow (I'm definitely guilty of stuff like that) so it really does impress me to see it done well here. Other then that I'm liking the concept for the character, both from an RP and Gameplay perpsective so far. 

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Thank you Dragon, your feedback and positive attitude are ever apprechiated! I won't have much time the next couple of weeks, but from the 20'th to the 30'th I'm planning to finish this all off... don't worry, there is much more on it's way :)