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Profile: Veezah

Tags: ##Argonian  ##adventurous 
  • September 17, 2018

     . [ | General | ] . 

    Full Name: Vezaah Brag

    Aliases: The cute one

    Sex: Male

    Race: Argonian

    Class: Adventurous

    Alignment: Neutral Good

    Title(s): None (currently)

    Age: 25 years old

     

     . [ | Appearance | ] . 

    Skin Tone: Dark

    Height: 6'1" (player.setscale 1.06)

    Weight: Heavy

    Build: Muscular

    Eyes: Blue intense

    Hair: ...

    Apparel: By the moment, a tipical mages robes

    Scars:...

    Weapons: Stuff

     

     . [ | Background | ] . 

    Special Abilities/Skills: Illusion, restoration and sneak abilities

    Place of Birth: ?¿?

    Religion: Atheits

    Residence: None yet :(

    Political Affiliations: Argonia and Orc.

    Occupation: try to be a millonaire

    Organizations/Factions: Thieve guild

    Favorite food/drink: cream muffins

    Interests: Alchemy, and Bounty Hunting

    Flaws: Cold mind

    Citizenship:  Skyrim, Mor Khazgur

    Relationships: Vezaah has many friends

    Personality: Warm-hearted, funny, and mysterius 

     

     . [ | Backstory | ] . 

    Vezaah was rescued when he was a little lizar by the orcs of Mor Khazgur, these orcs admitted as one more of the family and they looked after him until he was twenty. In all those years, Vezaah was convinced that he was an orc, until they mother told him the truth, it was a shock for Vezaah. Now, he knew why he felt special. In that year, Vezaah left the village looking for adventures, he arrived at Soledad, in these big city, Vezaah met a dunmer, he was a pirate,and told him about the advantages of being rich and that by joining his crew Vezaah as a healer could get rich, too. Veezah, don´t like kill person, and he left the crew. Then, in Soledad he tried to be a gigoló,Vezaah is very handsome, he thought that the best way to be a rich it was sleeping with a rich old woman and forgetting to work, that was a good method. But he ended up leaving him when a man asked him to disguise himself as a maid, he offered a lot of money, but Veezah was afraid. He got back on a ship as a carrier, but the ship was wrecked, there began the adventure of Veezah.

     

     

  • Member
    September 17, 2018

    That's an interesting backstory, almost like an argonian version of Orsinium's A Khajiit's Tale story in which a talking cat is rasied by the natives :) Those against the grain characters are good fun, and I like how you've fleshed Vezaah out here.

  • Member
    September 17, 2018

    I like seeing an Argonian with a good Backstory. gets a Like from me. 

  • Member
    September 18, 2018

    Not a backstory you see every day! Awesome stuff.

    I have a few requests though. The most pressing one is to change the title to 'Profile: Veezah', to make it fit in with the rest of the Profiles. Anmd for tags, you don't need to add a hssttag it's done for you, and you can also tag it 'RP:Profile' to be grouped with all the other profiles as well.

    It'd also be nice to see some more detail to go a long with such a good backstory. For example, 'Stuff' isn't suitable, if he doesn't use weapons tell us that, but it needs to be clear. Apart from that, just a little more detail in each section would go a long way. Why does he want to be a millionaire, why is he an athiest, why does he wear mage robes etc? Loads of stuff to build on.

  • September 19, 2018
    Thank you guys, I appreciate it, I'm sorry for my English, if it's a bit rough or poor, a greeting
  • Member
    September 21, 2018

    Vezaah said:

    Thank you guys, I appreciate it, I'm sorry for my English, if it's a bit rough or poor, a greeting

    No worries mate. I'm gonna change the title anyway for you, but you can get to the rest of it if and when you want.