AMOSS:TES Through the Mist

  • Here’s something I thought about giving a go for a while now. The idea is simple and some of you will recall there have been a few of these in the past. All you have to do is add a paragraph to the story in the comment and I will add it to the story. We'll see what happens along the way.

     

    The rules are simple;

    1 Keep it fairly clean.

    2. You cannot add content twice in a row. Let someone else have a chance.

    3. As to what characters you can use/add, it’s your paragraph so do what you will.

    4. No pairing off Aela the Huntress to anyone bar Sotek, an Argonian… you know who I mean so no funny business… and no killing off Sotek either…

     

    Werewolves/Vampires/ Silverhands/ even Orcs. All are welcome….

     

     

     

    The misty tendrils of dawn crept across the plains of Whiterun, snaking their way through trees and wrapping around rocks like ghostly apparitions reaching out to snatch all they can. A cold damp chill filled the air, marking its presence from the frosty breath of a buck as it breathed through its nostrils. A young doe grazed nearby, safe in the knowledge that at the slightest sign of any intruder, any threat that she would be alerted by the buck’s warning bark. 

    Two sets of eyes gazed across the morning mist and fell upon the deer in the distance. As of yet the two were unseen, hidden in vaporous cloud, their scent masked by the thick moist air.

     

    An arrow cut a path through the dawn mist, striking the doe in its flank. A angry redheaded Nord appeared and stalked through the mist, yelling curses that would make a sailor blush. Behind her trailed a green Argonian, alert, sniffing the air and trying to locate the mystery archer. A second arrow cut through the mist, pining the Argonian's tail to the ground. A second stream of curses broke the dawn stillness, this time from a rather stuck Argonion. 

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  • NoOneIsHear
    NoOneIsHear   ·  January 13, 2017
    An arrow cut a path through the dawn mist, striking the doe in its flank. A angry redheaded Nord appeared and stalked through the mist, yelling curses that would make a sailor blush. Behind her trailed a green Argonian alert, sniffing the air and trying t...  more
    • NoOneIsHear
      NoOneIsHear
      NoOneIsHear
      NoOneIsHear
      NoOneIsHear
      An arrow cut a path through the dawn mist, striking the doe in its flank. A angry redheaded Nord appeared and stalked through the mist, yelling curses that would make a sailor blush. Behind her trailed a green Argonian alert, sniffing the air and trying t...  more
        ·  January 13, 2017
      I have noticed I missed a comma out in the third sentence before alert.
      • Sotek
        Sotek
        NoOneIsHear
        NoOneIsHear
        NoOneIsHear
        I have noticed I missed a comma out in the third sentence before alert.
          ·  January 13, 2017
        Didn't notice. Was too busy screaming........
        Why for howling out loud and the Hunting Grounds did you shoot the tail?
        • NoOneIsHear
          NoOneIsHear
          Sotek
          Sotek
          Sotek
          Didn't notice. Was too busy screaming........
          Why for howling out loud and the Hunting Grounds did you shoot the tail?
            ·  January 14, 2017
          It was that or the foot.