Heaven was a whorehouse where everyone laid sky-high

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    Heaven was a whorehouse where everyone laid sky-high.

    I’d been told of Heaven--it was the place to be,

    by the drug-addled wanderers, that I would pass and I would meet.

    They told such ravings as, “Go there, it’s great!

    The only place on this Earth God didn’t forsake!”

    Those words proved enough, I started my journey,

    far ‘cross the wastes, to the place of high learning,

    and yearning, I felt for Heaven--

    the name is promise enough.

    I walked for some miles on some days, sometimes

    six

    some-

    times twelve

    sometimes twenty three

    --this journey was endless--it went on for days.

    I often laid restless at night thinking things, like

    “What if Heaven isn’t real, what if those were all lies?

    What if I don’t make it to Heaven when I die?”

    And in the end, yes, they all turned out lies.

    Even if I made it to Heaven before I died.

    It was day

    twenty six

    or was it day thirty three

    that I found this unholy retreat.

    It lay in a basin

    in the Arizona sand,

    all rotted like carrion,

    but high in demand.

    I could smell the paganism

    coming from Heaven,

    I could smell the sex and the heroin highs,

    I could smell the death in back-room thirteen,

    I smelled all the exposed thighs,

    and my eye, upon women exposed fell,

    I fell into the allure, of Heaven’s heady leaded stead.

    Dead--the patrons, the prostitutes, me

    Living--my despising of this un-sacrosanct leave.

    Heaven was a whorehouse that not enough people left.

Comments

4 Comments
  • Idesto
    Idesto   ·  June 10, 2016
    As the man said, deep!
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  February 27, 2016
    I presume this is Fallout...
    Added a tag. #WTpoem.
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 25, 2016
    Wow.... Just, wow....
  • ShyGuyWolf
    ShyGuyWolf   ·  February 24, 2016
    dang son, that's deep.