My first Blog/skyrim story Intro/Preview

  • Hello everyone I had an idea, and that idea was to write about this one or two characters  that I always wanted to write about but i did not know which concept would apeal to most of you readers... so I will give a little intro to a vampirc character of mine who I plan to rp as in Blackwood

       Sorin Markov ,  ancient  Nordic vampire

    Background: Born in skyrim during the time of tiber septim.Sorin was raised into a very rich family and had no problems or worries but as Sorin grew into his twentys he desired more so he went off to join tiber septims crusade to conquer tamiral. And as Sorin fought at Tiber's side the two grew into good friends while sorin was his top lieutenant. And sorin witnessed all of Tiber's triumphs and glory even when he became emperor. But when once when sorin returned one day to his home years later in skyrim he found that his family were killed by vampires. The vampire responsible passed on the gift/curse to sorin before he diead of his wounds born from the family defending themselves. And when Sorin returned to his   friend tiber and confessd what had happend Tiber cast him out! Sending for his guards to drive him out. Sorin escaped rage filled. But Sorin decided to work on other things over the ages. He built up a vampire coven and ruled from a castle, But soon became bored with castle politics and so the killed them off. But when He heard that Tiber septim was worshiped as divine he laughed . And So then then for most of his time sorin trained in fighting, gathered knowledge in books and enjoyed life he also traveled all around tamiral  inculding Akvair, experiencing new things . What sorin also did on his travels was to kill vampires who he thought threatened the future of the vampire like a vampire who killed too many people or drew too much attention. But  on one of his trips back to skyrim  sorin was attacked by the dawn guard , ambushed by 3 men sorin drew his sword and killed them all! Sorin then decided he wanted to stay in skyrim for a time. So then he wandered skyrim looking for a suitable place to live
    The Next character I had in mind was about a Khajiit mercenary who was raised in a khajiit caravan  but at a young age who's group was murdered by thalmor for selling armor/weapons to imperial soldiers during the war. i wish to expand  upon but I don't know if I should so It would be great if you guys gave feedback if you guys would like a story involving one if these guys and also any ideas for story and things like that is absolutely welcome criticism is also welcome    

Comments

5 Comments
  • Drakon
    Drakon   ·  August 6, 2013
    bryn 1: to me he's a nord 2: I read his story from magic the gathering (origin of pic/char) and they considered him human 3; yes I know hes from mason's awesome build the nemesis and he listed considers this guy as a elf that's his opinion but yeah i did ...  more
  • Bryn
    Bryn   ·  August 5, 2013
    THAT'S A PICTURE OF AN ELF, NOT A NORD!!! :P
  • Drakon
    Drakon   ·  August 5, 2013
    alright guy thanks for the feed back and yes I know I forgot to fix spelling but yes I think I will create sorin's story 
  • JTA
    JTA   ·  August 5, 2013
    That was good :) really good, really loved to know what happens whit Sorin, maybe he is gonna go to Morthal because of rumours of monsters in the march.... or.. Since he was attacked by dawnguards, maybe he will join up whit Harkon :)
  • Egida
    Egida   ·  August 5, 2013
    Well the story is good but you have several minor spelling mistakes: Akvair,tamrial, twentys...and also you should write names in capitals and then it would be perfect.
    Sorry,I'm a grammar nazi.