A Simple Soldier's Poem

  • Corpses piled high on the battlefield,

    All around me soldiers died,

    With the legion I advanced with sword and shield,

    The dead were scattered far and wide.

    No quarter given, no chance to yield,

    Legionnaires were killed to either side,

    But this warrior's life and fate were sealed.

    A Decurion beside me fell and cried,

    His breastplate bent and torn and peeled,

    A marksman's arrow had stopped his stride.

    My arm was tired, blade too heavy to wield,

    But on I marched for Legion's pride.

    Above us crows and ravens wheeled,

    As we entered the breach to stem the tide,

    Yet ever onward, our bodies steeled,

    Towards the standard that was our guide.

    Then from an unseen blow I reeled,

    As our opposing forces clashed and vied.

    To bloody ground I fell and kneeled,

    The pain too great, too much to abide.

    My armour rent and flesh revealed,

    I awaited the stroke or a blade inside.

    But my ordained death had been repealed,

    The grim spectre of death I had defied,

    Yet at the prospect of renewed life I sighed,

    For in Aetherius I yearned to reside.

Comments

19 Comments
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  March 7, 2016
    Don't worry about it Phil. You wern't the first and you won't be the last. At least you are aware of it now.
    Great piece by the way.
  • Daedric Priest
    Daedric Priest   ·  March 7, 2016
    This is MLP - Major League Poetry. I just came up with that. 
    Seriously this was epic.
  • The Wing
    The Wing   ·  March 7, 2016
    Hahaha, I didn't even notice until Sotek said something mate. XD
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  March 7, 2016
    Shit. I am so sorry guys. Bad that I didn't rtfm! Please forgive me guys, it won't happen again.
  • The Wing
    The Wing   ·  March 7, 2016
    There has to be a minimum 24-hour time gap between a person's blog posts.
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  March 7, 2016
    Sorry Wolfie, I don't follow. What was I too early for? I didn't mean to break any rules, please forgive me.
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  March 7, 2016
    Hi Phil.
    I hate to be the Bad Wolf of the blog, but I noticed you posted this a few hours too early.
    I've adjusted the posting stamp to 22:00 March 6th to compensate.
    Any questions about it then please feel free to ask me.
    Sotek, L...  more
  • The Wing
    The Wing   ·  March 7, 2016
    It's not painful in that way. *sigh* You and your self-depreciation. x)
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  March 7, 2016
    Lol, Rancid, I know. I read it once and quite like it then read it again and hate it.
  • The Wing
    The Wing   ·  March 7, 2016
    Phil, dude, this is some painful stuff.