Mankind - Part 1-6 teaser

  • MANKIND

    Part 1-6 Teaser

     

    "Oh my God!" said Isaac as he and his group saw the wasteland for the first time.

     

    Everyone was panicking as Isaac was trying to calm them down. At that moment they saw someone approaching them. The man wore a green jacket and had a shotgun on his back. Isaac took out his 10mm. "Stop where you are!"

     

    "On the ground! NOW!" yelled the Guner.

     

    The Molerat jumped on Collins as Isaac tried to keep the rest away. "Shoot it!" yelled Collins.

     

    It was over. The wall stood and the Gunners were pulling back. "They're running!" said Collins.

     

    But Isaac knew better. "No. They're regrouping. Repair any damages to the wall. They're gonna come back."

     

    "They've breached the wall!" yelled Nora as she carried Anna into their old home.

     

    As everyone was on their knees, the the leading Gunner kneeled in front of Isaac. "I will show you the true meaning of fear, Vault Dweller."

     

    Isaac put the barrel of the gun on the mans neck. "Look at the sky, asshole." BANG.

     

    Author's Note:

    First time writing a trailer, so be gentle on me. The meaning of the last sentence will be revealed later.

Comments

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  • The Long-Chapper
    The Long-Chapper   ·  November 29
    Hmm, Delta, I hate to be the party pooper, but usually blogs are 400 words long, unless it's a poem. So I'm not quite sure what to do with this one. 
    • DeltaFox
      DeltaFox
      The Long-Chapper
      The Long-Chapper
      The Long-Chapper
      Hmm, Delta, I hate to be the party pooper, but usually blogs are 400 words long, unless it's a poem. So I'm not quite sure what to do with this one. 
        ·  November 29
      Yeah, it just came to me a few minutes before I actually wrote it. Kinda like a small teaser.
      • The Long-Chapper
        The Long-Chapper
        DeltaFox
        DeltaFox
        DeltaFox
        Yeah, it just came to me a few minutes before I actually wrote it. Kinda like a small teaser.
          ·  November 29
        Well, it either needs to be a 400 word trailer or a poem or I'll have to delete it. You have 24 hours to make the proper edits. Let me know if you have any questions or need advice on expanding it. You can if you add more description, like visuals, scents...  more
        • DeltaFox
          DeltaFox
          The Long-Chapper
          The Long-Chapper
          The Long-Chapper
          Well, it either needs to be a 400 word trailer or a poem or I'll have to delete it. You have 24 hours to make the proper edits. Let me know if you have any questions or need advice on expanding it. You can if you add more description, like visuals, scents...  more
            ·  November 29
          I'll edit it. Don't worry Liss.
          • The Long-Chapper
            The Long-Chapper
            DeltaFox
            DeltaFox
            DeltaFox
            I'll edit it. Don't worry Liss.
              ·  December 1
            Waiting for edits!! Ready to deletes! :D Edit, Delta, EDIT!!