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  May 25, 2016

  

  

  This is just a bit of a preface to my stories. 

  1. DO NOT EXPECT FREQUENT UPDATES! I write when I am in the mood for writing. This comes and goes so don't get your hopes up for a giant story.

  2. This blog involves swearing, it won't be in every sentence. It'll be things like damn and ass and bitch and on special occasions The F word and the S word, synonymous for feces. This is Fallout so swearing does exist.

  3. This is a journal written after my character Ben joins the Brotherhood. This is a bit before the protagonist of Fallout 4 gets out of the vault so things like dogmeat will not exist (That doesn't mean no dogs though). Same thing with things like the fire fight with the Minute-men and the Raiders in Concord.

  Thats about it, I don't want to spoil anything so I'm not going to into detail.

   

            Chapters

         Chapter 1: The Darkness

         Chapter 2: The Realization                                                                                                                                        

  

  

  This is just a bit of a preface to my stories. 

  1. DO NOT EXPECT FREQUENT UPDATES! I write when I am in the mood for writing. This comes and goes so don't get your hopes up for a giant story.

  2. This blog involves swearing, it won't be in every sentence. It'll be things like damn and ass and bitch and on special occasions The F word and the S word, synonymous for feces. This is Fallout so swearing does exist.

  3. This is a journal written after my character Ben joins the Brotherhood. This is a bit before the protagonist of Fallout 4 gets out of the vault so things like dogmeat will not exist (That doesn't mean no dogs though). Same thing with things like the fire fight with the Minute-men and the Raiders in Concord.

  Thats about it, I don't want to spoil anything so I'm not going to into detail.

   

            Chapters

         Chapter 1: The Darkness

         Chapter 2: The Realization                                                                                                                                        

• Sotek

  

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  May 25, 2016

  Not all of us follow Lore so I wouldn't worry too much. Have a look for some artwork or screenshots to brighten your TOC up. It would work wonders here.

  Not all of us follow Lore so I wouldn't worry too much. Have a look for some artwork or screenshots to brighten your TOC up. It would work wonders here.

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  May 26, 2016

  Okay thanks, I'll take some screenshots soon 

  Okay thanks, I'll take some screenshots soon 

• Teineeva

  

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  May 26, 2016

  Sotek here is probably the biggest offender. But yeah Lore is a guideline, but if you don't want to follow it, you don't have to. I would also recommand sprucing up your TOC a bit, especially once your story starts to grow a bit. It doesn't need to be flashy, just a header is often more than fine.

  Sotek here is probably the biggest offender. But yeah Lore is a guideline, but if you don't want to follow it, you don't have to. I would also recommand sprucing up your TOC a bit, especially once your story starts to grow a bit. It doesn't need to be flashy, just a header is often more than fine.

• DeltaFox

  

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  May 24, 2017

  The story looks great! :) The ToC looks good for now, but as your story progresses, you may want to spice things up a bit. Add a small background to your story. These are just suggestions. Anyway, it's good to see another Fallout story reveal itself. I believe you have great potential.

  The story looks great! :) The ToC looks good for now, but as your story progresses, you may want to spice things up a bit. Add a small background to your story. These are just suggestions. Anyway, it's good to see another Fallout story reveal itself. I believe you have great potential.