the Tale of Mathias Wulfe entries 1 and 2

  • "Hey Mathias Wulfe,

    It's Jake The Orc,

    I'm letting you know that you should head to Skyrim and met me there.

    Sincerely,

    Jake

    Entry 1:

    Man, it was a big hassle getting to Skyrim. I was captured by the Imperials, they thought I was a mercenary for a army called "Stormcloaks" and took my gear.... But glad I got out of Helgen though, I followed the nice Imperial Solider that was next to the jerk Lady... I found a mine next to Riverwood and clear it out, might go back their to mine the rest of it.... I sold most of the stuff I picked off of the Bandits from the mine, did score steel gauntlets and boots.... I ordered some Steel ingots from Hadvar's uncle and  bought a travel lantern  and a cure disease potion. I took the quest to retrieve a Golden Claw... 

    Entry2:

    after I rented a room at the inn and found Melissa Raven, a Dunmer Spell-Sword, and we headed out for the Golden Claw.. ran into some trouble, but Melissa saved me a few times... I found the claw from the thief and did fight off some Draugr and a Draugr Lord, the Draugr lord had a strange stone tablet... also had a strange feeling next to a Word Wall... found a Cave that had some Skeletons and a Necromancer, I disenchanted the enchanted stuff I found and got back to the owner of the Claw.... spent the night in the Inn and made it to a Farm where some warriors where fighting a Giant. I charged at the giant with my steel-forged sword aloft, shield at the ready... I made my Sword with my Steel ingots... the Leader of the group ran over and told me that her name is Aela and she with her friends are member of the Companions.. I asked them if they Knew Jake the Orc, Aela said that Jake is inside Whiterun praying to Kynerath... I followed them to the front gate and was interrupted by the Guard, told him about Helgen and he unlocked the door and told me to head inside and speak to the Jarl... I ran to the Dragonsreach and his Housecarl stopped me with her blade, I told her why I was here and she let me talk to Jarl Balgruuf the Greater, who told me to talk to his Mage about the Dragons... I gave the mage what he wanted and read some books about some guest that I should take care off.. one of the Books is called "Dragon's Forge" it talked about the Dragon Priests and their forge..

    some time after I left to head out to Whiterun Tower, I ran into Jake and he joined up with me...

    Glad to have my Partner back.

Comments

3 Comments
  • ShyGuyWolf
    ShyGuyWolf   ·  July 14, 2015
    thanks Andrew, and thanks for the tip. I keep forgetting that.
  • Andrew Shepherd
    Andrew Shepherd   ·  July 14, 2015
    Hey Mathias,
    A nice start. I'm by no means a professional writer and my style can be a bit sloppy at times but I could suggest a couple of things. Maybe try adding a bit more descriptive language about how Mathias is going about his adventures to ad...  more
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  July 13, 2015
    Hi Mathias
    Ah the old diary form story. Some aren't keen on this style but I find it easy reading so no problems there.
    I noticed you haven't made a TOC page yet. Here's a link to help you.
    Start here!
    If you have any questions the...  more