Kiss at the End

  • My soul ascended up like smoke on the wind, lifted as if on the backs of birds, a final kiss from Kyne.

    At height I paused to look down at the fighting of my kin, my spirit peaceful as it observed the pallid corpse of mine.

    White and pale, gleaming on blood red snow, my eyes were glass and unseeing, to Sovngarde I go.

    The rending of flesh from bone below as brothers fought former friends, seemed so tragic, such a waste, as yet more men were laid low.

    The swords and axes rose and fell, doing their grisly work, fighting and dying, ravens crying, more eyes lost their glow. 

    I could hear the sound of song and laughter resounding from the Hall of Valour but tarried for a while I did, before leaving life behind.

    Reflecting on the brutal war, the sickness of mankind, my ghost quiet and still as I watched the battle's bloody grind.

    If I could change just one thing from life it would be for something pure, to join the healing temple of Mara, Handmaiden, loving, kind.

    To heal the land of fair Skyrim, rather than adding to its pain instead, I would chose this life of tender mercy over bitter regrets of the dead. 

    One more challenge lay ahead as I shrugged off my mortal veil, leaving the bodies of the fallen behind, lifeless, still and pale.

    On the Whale Bone Bridge, one final fight, one last test of mortal might, to face the trial of Shieldthane Tsun before Hero's End and earned respite.

    So up I soared into moonless night, a shade or wraith, unnoticed, slight. To Sovngarde I go to sing of my kinsmen brave, my soul to mend.

    On the backs of birds I soared, leaving behind my shield and sword, to Heart's Rest of my own accord by the Grace of Kyne, Kiss at the End. 

Comments

19 Comments
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 28, 2016
    Aww thanks Ed. It is my hope that if in the unlikely event there is such a thing as a soul that it immediately finds peace in death and forgets, or is rendered indifferent to, the horror of life. Coz the alternative doesn't bear thinking about.
  • Edana
    Edana   ·  February 28, 2016
    A lovely poem, Phil. I love the balance of sadness and serenity you've struck here. Very nicely done. 
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 27, 2016
  • The Long-Chapper
    The Long-Chapper   ·  February 27, 2016
    Hehe. 
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 27, 2016
    You and your wildlife Lis :) You should write adore guide on the flora and fauna of Tamriel, complete with their mating habits 
    Maybe if you weren't satisfied with it, just like another paragraph talking about war.

    Good advice  I think ...  more
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 27, 2016
    Really Phil? When I read this, and even now, I think the transition was pretty good. Maybe if you weren't satisfied with it, just like another paragraph talking about war.
  • The Long-Chapper
    The Long-Chapper   ·  February 27, 2016
    Yes, shame ravens aren't in Skyrim gameplay, but I sure as hell slap crows and ravens in Straag Rod. Eagles too. Falcons, terns, skuas, eider ducks, loons. In fact, most of the birds you can find in Northern Europe should be there. Sorry, Skyrim's ecosyst...  more
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 27, 2016
    Spot on Lis, I enjoyed Gwaihir too. Not sure how authentic it is as a means of soul conveyance in TES lore but I liked the images it created in my thought box, reminiscent of Odin's ravens.
  • The Long-Chapper
    The Long-Chapper   ·  February 27, 2016
    The imagery of soaring on the backs of birds was particularly compelling for me and gave me images of Gwaihir, the windlord. It's really a lovely mythology. The developers did right to borrow from the Valkyries. 
  • Justiciar Thorien
    Justiciar Thorien   ·  February 27, 2016
    Hehehe)) You are wrong) I don't do kind, I am all for truth and justice)))) And I am a proud Thalmor and love to be right))))