The Oranges Are In Bloom- A poem from an Altmer conscipt

  • The oranges are in bloom.

    At least, I think they are.

    It's been months since my departure

    With a blade instead of broom.

    The children are playing on beaches.

    Well, I think it is so.

    I have no way to know as it seems to be years

    Since my leaving on Altmer barges.

    The birds are beginning to breed.

    Or, so I believe.

    The waves of the soldiers know no reprieve

    As we march without a trusty steed.

    The oranges are in bloom.

    How I miss my homeland green

    With it's peaceful and lovely scenes;

    And me, with my broom.

    Alinor is lost to me

    As I fight and wound and kill and plea

    As men are cut down at the knee

    And we destroy the Empire lean.

    The oranges are in bloom.

    They will carry me home

    With their scent:

    Until it mixes with the smoke.

    All is lost.

    We are changed.

    The war is unrelenting.

    Yet the oranges are still in bloom.

Comments

14 Comments
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 28, 2016
    A note, like Phil said, it is "#poem", not poetry. This also applies to your other poem you made on the 26nd.
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 27, 2016
    Nah, I got the tag wrong  Wanted you to see your theme tune though
  • Sotek
    Sotek   ·  February 27, 2016
    Writing slumps don't last forever but it's great that you have a way of digging yourself out.
    Nice poem by the way. Starting to think I'm mixed up with a whole bunch of Thalmor though...

    Phil beat me here...
  • Cinae
    Cinae   ·  February 26, 2016
    Yes, this is very lovely. I hope you write more poetry . . . about elves.
  • Lyall
    Lyall   ·  February 26, 2016
    Beautiful! I'm glad you are coming back Accursed, this is one good poem!
  • Justiciar Thorien
    Justiciar Thorien   ·  February 26, 2016
    Ah, the orange trees of Alinor... 
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 26, 2016
    I think this needs the tag "#poetry" added if I recall correctly. In before The Big Bad Wolf



    Edit: This version is cleaner...
  • Paws
    Paws   ·  February 26, 2016
    Wow, lovely!
  • The Wing
    The Wing   ·  February 26, 2016
    I so love war poetry.  Well done Gloom.
  • A-Pocky-Hah!
    A-Pocky-Hah!   ·  February 26, 2016
    Glad you're back to writing, Accursed.
    Hope you get your mindset again to continue Caranthir's story.